Lovers And Sinners. (Peter: Part 3)
I sit with my books in front of me, but I can't concentrate. I know I have to clear my SATS. I needed a scholarship. But, the letters look hazy, and tears form in my eyes.
The perfect evening had been ruined, and I realized that Serena has become distant from me. A side of her that I never knew has started to surface.
The only one who knows what is going on, is Kia. I'm sure about that. But there's no way that I can get to the depth of it.
I try calling Serena, but her cell is switched off. She didn't have any weekend plans, so she ought to be at home. I think of going over..
I needed her, even if she no longer did.
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Parking my car outside the Saunder's house, I walk up to the front door. There is light in just one room. It was a good sign that Serena would be alone at home. Kia was supposed to go out with her parents.
I ring the doorbell and wait. Serena takes a long time to open.
It's dark inside. I look into her eyes..After a while, she looks away. She says nothing. Holding my hands, she leads me upstairs.
Her hair falls on her shoulders and her smell lingers between us. Her hands feel warm. I hold her close, and for once, she takes the lead.
Pushing me on the bed, she comes over me. 'I love you..' She whispers. I pull her close, and run my fingers through her hair. I wanted to talk to her, but I wanted to live in this moment.
Our lips meet..the sweetness gets to me. The short peaks soon turn intense, and before long, we are pulling at each others clothes, gasping for our breath.
She presses herself against me, and buries her head into my shoulders.
We belong to each other.
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I lift her chin and look into her eyes. But she refuses to meet mine.
Suddenly, the lights go on, and the warmth I no longer feel. Looking towards the door, I see Serena burst into tears. I see the real Serena shatter. While lying besides me, I see Kia stare at me and smile. 'I've always loved you Peter.' She says. But I don't listen. She tries holding my hands, but I push her away.
This could not be real..
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Coming next: Final part :)
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ReplyDeleteWHAT JUST HAPPENED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bring up the final soon!
@ Red: Haha :) I'll post it soon :D
ReplyDeleteWhaaaaaaat is happening? :(
ReplyDeletePS : Did I tell you the title of this string is awesome?
I knew you as a poet!
ReplyDeleteYou are an even better story teller! :D
A little off from blogging somehow!
Not nothing to post!
No good boys in Loyola,trust me!
I knew this was comin..!!! now am wondering how is it gonna end..!!! wow.. this is just getting more and more interesting..!!
ReplyDeleteomg I knew this was coming..the moment she took the lead :/ .. aahh crap! Wow what story-telling girl.. keep keep going :D
ReplyDeleteaaahhhh!!
ReplyDeletewhat happens!!! pls!
I often visit ur blog..actually me no more at colege...so jst dont feel the zeal to write..
ReplyDeleteAnyway are u granting my request..pls do it.asap
Ooops...whr the last part?? bring it on!!!
ReplyDeleteoh wow...how did i not see that coming...nice...this could get really crazy...cant wait for the final...
ReplyDeleteyaar ab to mujhe ek PETER chahiye...!
ReplyDeletetwitter pe tweet kar deti hoon :P
waisey jokes apart..!
this is not beautiful not awesome and not goood
it is THRILLING :) it makes me want more, listen more, see more, read more
be 18 :) fast and then make a movie and call me for the premiere..! and PETER koi achcha banda rakhna..!
i so pity the real SERENA :P
and i came to know one more thing
GUYS ARE DUMB :P
Can't wait to read the final!
ReplyDeleteI love the way you handle the emotions. Nice twist! :)
ReplyDeleteThat is a great story teller which is emerging on the horizon!
ReplyDeleteGood god! What did you just do :) I thought Juhi is this lil girl and look oh lord :D Hihihihahahahah! Women, are such bitches/the ones in the story/. I hope the poor guy doesn't kill himself after this.
ReplyDeleteMy God this is such an epic series. You seriously have the makings of a writer. This story is so romantic and dark at the same time and you're also building suspense. You should write a novel in a few years.
ReplyDeletenow how did i miss this awesome part...woaaaah.......awesome...sheer awesomeness...:-)
ReplyDeleteI had already guessed it :|
ReplyDeleteBtw are they like really sexy, the twins? :P
aJ
Loved this twisty part of the story...enjoyed it
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