Lovers And Siners- Guest Entry (Peter: Final Part) 


I picked up my clothes and ran behind Serena.

I was scared and insecure about what was to come.
She was never good at controlling her emotions and I had to stop her.
I caught her hand at the door and she pushed me back. Slapped me, again and again.
I knew she was weak, too weak and my soul pained for being the reason.
I looked in her eyes, just to see my guilt-ridden face drowning in her tears. I left.
......................
It has been over a week. And I hadn't talked to her.
Kia called up and I have been ignoring her calls.
I know how to fix things with Serena, I could have done it then and there.
She loves me and she'll understand it was a mistake, an unintentional mistake.
But, I didn't.
Something had changed and I felt it within me.
Was it really unintentional?
Had I failed to recognize the love that ran in my veins..
..to misread the eyes that had spoken a life without saying a word, every time?
Her smell, her skin, her touch, it was irreplaceable.
So what was it then? I... I don't know.
It was Kia, hadn't I known that the very Goddamn moment she opened the door and held me?
But then she was majestic, and the pleasure was irresistible. I wasn't forced, the flow was natural.
I don't remember having that passionate a kiss with Serena since forever.
There was something wild that got free within me, in those few moments.
So, I knew.
It was over between me and Serena, then and there.
She loved me and I couldn't have held on to her any longer, my conscience would bite me.
But then what was it that I did? Hurt her, as bad as I could afford. I.. I don't know.

*Phone rings*
'Kia calling'.
She filled me..she craves for me.
I pressed the answering button and heard her.
'Hello! Peter, are you there?..
Hello? I need you..'. I cut the phone.
Why? I.. I don't know.
I wish there was someone to understand, to tell what was it that I am feeling. Do you?
.......

Written By: AJ :) http://you-me-and-serendipity.blogspot.com/
Thank You :)
Image Courtesy: Google :)

With this I come to an end of Lovers And Sinners. :) Thanks to each one of you for reading.
Love,
Philo!

Comments

  1. suvaibaNovember 24, 2011 at 8:21 AM

    em i 1st one??
    *excited*
    and AJ yaar tussi chaa gaye...!
    the original story still lingers in my memory and smells fresh,..
    and and did i tell you, that title is awesome. :)
    :)

    ReplyDelete
  2. Brian MillerNovember 24, 2011 at 8:29 AM

    nice....i like this wrap up. an unconventional love story...nice job

    ReplyDelete
  3. RichaNovember 24, 2011 at 8:34 AM

    Good work there! I had to scroll and find the earlier parts before I could reach this one. But Kudos to the level of story telling.

    ReplyDelete
  4. Selvaggia CapizziNovember 24, 2011 at 1:20 PM

    Whoa, now that it's over I am already missing this story and the characters. Hoper to read a new one soon!

    ReplyDelete
  5. Rahul BhatiaNovember 24, 2011 at 8:06 PM

    Juhi, you can mature into a professional Mills&Boon kind of author! Very impressed..

    ReplyDelete
  6. Misterio VidaNovember 24, 2011 at 10:23 PM

    absorbing read... but alas like everything in the world, it comes to an end... we will miss it :) thanks for sharing...

    ReplyDelete
  7. Red HandedNovember 24, 2011 at 10:48 PM

    Ah ice ending..liked it :)

    ReplyDelete
  8. Superrrnickkk...!!!!November 25, 2011 at 1:59 AM

    Wow..nice ending.. Aj has done it again..i really loved the turmoil peter undergoes in his mind...!! Loved this ending too..!!!

    ReplyDelete
  9. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺November 25, 2011 at 4:41 AM

    Nice post :) Liked it

    ReplyDelete
  10. CяystalNovember 25, 2011 at 7:51 AM

    It was an absorbing read ree! You didn't kill the intrigue and the reader went on gaping in till the end.
    PS: I wish you'd involve less sub parts from next time :)

    ReplyDelete
  11. Confused SoulNovember 25, 2011 at 8:05 AM

    Omg AJ has written it superbly. I loved this end! It seems so cool.. great job!

    ReplyDelete
  12. OvaisNovember 25, 2011 at 9:23 AM

    Ah.

    Kia and Peter are right for each other.
    But the hurt that they all feel..

    ReplyDelete
  13. R-A-JNovember 28, 2011 at 7:33 AM

    Aaah, the finale :).. nicely written :)

    Hope all's well with u PhilO..:)

    ReplyDelete
  14. ZebaNovember 28, 2011 at 11:15 AM

    This was interesting.. Different.

    ReplyDelete
  15. aakashNovember 28, 2011 at 11:40 AM

    Thanks everyone.. :)
    @phoolo: meko tag toh kar deti :| :P

    aJ

    ReplyDelete
  16. AnonymousDecember 15, 2012 at 3:59 AM

    awesome...

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Your words mean a lot :)

Popular posts from this blog

Tripping Cause I'm Clumsy :)

Image
picture from:  here They say that we suddenly grow up at a point, without realizing.  We suddenly stop doing what we always have been doing and we take a break to think. And then we change the gears and let go of all the stupidity.  We may not like it in the beginning, but this break is required. We need to sort ourselves out, and I think that this is what I’ve been trying to do from the past few weeks. I’ve heard that college changes people. Tomboyish girls start to wear make up, and the nerds start to bunk classes, while the desperate ones are all over each other. No hard feelings, but this is what happens. I’ve been thinking about which category I lie in. And honestly, I’m clueless. While people around me are too busy attending some party or the other, or while uploading pictures on  social networking sites, I’ve been so lost because none of these things seem appealing to me any longer. I don’t find the need of going to the washroom eve...
Read more

♫..♥..♫

Image
"Trust me. There's no way that I can sing in front of you." "Well, I don't care. You just have to!" I thrust the guitar into his hands and sit down in front of him. "You won't ever give up now, will you?" He sighs as he strikes a chord. "We got this afternoon You've got this room for two.." His eyes are shut, his voice mesmerizing. Soft..calm..just beautiful. His fingers gently move, the rhythm comes to him so naturally. I just sit and listen. And that's all I want to do. "You were wonderful." I say, once he stops. He laughs. "Your body is my wonderland." He kisses my shoulders gently. "You should really try for the competition, you know. You'll get through." "You don't get it Lucy. I can't sing in front of people." He snaps. "Just close your eyes and think that you're singing to me. Do it for me. Please.." I look into his eyes and hold on to his gaze. "Th...
Read more

Unfaithful

Image
“I don’t wanna hurt him anymore, I don’t wanna take away his life... I don’t wanna be a murderer.” I lie on the crumpled bed sheet, alone. Naked. I close my eyes, tighten my fist, and try to stop the guilt from growing, from eating me up. It wasn’t the first time. I should have been accustomed to all of this by now, but no I’m not. I don’t think I ever will…yet I continue to do so, and yet I lie in his arms, and crave for him when he’s not around. The pictures appear in my mind. Flash backs. They always do after he leaves. And I always try to shut them from my mind. But it’s next to impossible. No, I don’t love him. I already have a lover, and he? He already has a family. It’s just the craving, the desperation, and the intense longing of being loved. He caresses me, he’s firm, strong, and I easily melt inside him. When he’s besides me, he is all I see. I don’t think about anything else. The world just seems beautiful when we lie next to each other, exhausted. And then, he leaves...
Read more