Thursday, November 24, 2011

Lovers And Siners- Guest Entry (Peter: Final Part)


I picked up my clothes and ran behind Serena.

I was scared and insecure about what was to come.
She was never good at controlling her emotions and I had to stop her.
I caught her hand at the door and she pushed me back. Slapped me, again and again.
I knew she was weak, too weak and my soul pained for being the reason.
I looked in her eyes, just to see my guilt-ridden face drowning in her tears. I left.
......................
It has been over a week. And I hadn't talked to her.
Kia called up and I have been ignoring her calls.
I know how to fix things with Serena, I could have done it then and there.
She loves me and she'll understand it was a mistake, an unintentional mistake.
But, I didn't.
Something had changed and I felt it within me.
Was it really unintentional?
Had I failed to recognize the love that ran in my veins..
..to misread the eyes that had spoken a life without saying a word, every time?
Her smell, her skin, her touch, it was irreplaceable.
So what was it then? I... I don't know.
It was Kia, hadn't I known that the very Goddamn moment she opened the door and held me?
But then she was majestic, and the pleasure was irresistible. I wasn't forced, the flow was natural.
I don't remember having that passionate a kiss with Serena since forever.
There was something wild that got free within me, in those few moments.
So, I knew.
It was over between me and Serena, then and there.
She loved me and I couldn't have held on to her any longer, my conscience would bite me.
But then what was it that I did? Hurt her, as bad as I could afford. I.. I don't know.

*Phone rings*
'Kia calling'.
She filled me..she craves for me.
I pressed the answering button and heard her.
'Hello! Peter, are you there?..
Hello? I need you..'. I cut the phone.
Why? I.. I don't know.
I wish there was someone to understand, to tell what was it that I am feeling. Do you?
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Written By: AJ :) http://you-me-and-serendipity.blogspot.com/
Thank You :)
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With this I come to an end of Lovers And Sinners. :) Thanks to each one of you for reading.
Love,
Philo!

16 comments:

  1. em i 1st one??
    *excited*
    and AJ yaar tussi chaa gaye...!
    the original story still lingers in my memory and smells fresh,..
    and and did i tell you, that title is awesome. :)
    :)

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  2. nice....i like this wrap up. an unconventional love story...nice job

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  3. Good work there! I had to scroll and find the earlier parts before I could reach this one. But Kudos to the level of story telling.

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  4. Whoa, now that it's over I am already missing this story and the characters. Hoper to read a new one soon!

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  5. Juhi, you can mature into a professional Mills&Boon kind of author! Very impressed..

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  6. absorbing read... but alas like everything in the world, it comes to an end... we will miss it :) thanks for sharing...

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  7. Wow..nice ending.. Aj has done it again..i really loved the turmoil peter undergoes in his mind...!! Loved this ending too..!!!

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  8. It was an absorbing read ree! You didn't kill the intrigue and the reader went on gaping in till the end.
    PS: I wish you'd involve less sub parts from next time :)

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  9. Omg AJ has written it superbly. I loved this end! It seems so cool.. great job!

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  10. Ah.

    Kia and Peter are right for each other.
    But the hurt that they all feel..

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  11. Aaah, the finale :).. nicely written :)

    Hope all's well with u PhilO..:)

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  12. This was interesting.. Different.

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  13. Thanks everyone.. :)
    @phoolo: meko tag toh kar deti :| :P

    aJ

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