Thursday, December 4, 2008

Wash It All ()ut

It's all over,
Back to the begining,
Back to the time, you were a stranger to me!
Wish I could see who you were then.
Oh, how I long to go back to the past,
Someone put me into a timemachine,
I plead!
Back I long to go to the time,
When I didn't know you!
It was a waste,
You were just one of that lot
Who didn't try to step in.
You played with me
And failed to see that I really cares.
Oh! Please come,
Put me into a deep sleep.
Take me all the way back.
Let it rain hard,
Wash your memories out my mind,
Cause not knowing you, will be a very good thing to do!

10 comments:

  1. its beautiful!!u gotta tell me 4 whom u r writting dis??

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  2. i like this one alot
    and the photo is grrreat like frosted flakes :)

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  3. this was beautiful. =]
    i can relate to this poem.
    you have an awesome blog.

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  4. Very beautiful and emotional. I loved it

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  5. This totally describes me and my relationship!! XD

    Btw this is Dibsy aka Agent D.

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  6. you are 13 and you write poems like this, so mature... have to say juhi, u kick a**...

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  7. Great poem!! I love the picture too :)

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  8. i actually made a poem!! yeah!! anyways, saw u like linkin park. me too! they are like the best band.. ever... evers... and u write the best poems ever!

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  9. check out my new blog.
    http://stranger8eyed.blogspot.com/

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Your words mean a lot :)