Moonlight Kiss. Jan 'o5 (Part 2)



"Come, lets go in. It's cold outside."
"I'm fine here.." I say.

My mother slides her fingers through mine, and sits down besides me.
We both weep as we sit and watch the sea from a distance.

We watch the powerful waves go up and down.. It does not remain still at all.
Yes, I watch the powerful waves. The waves in front of which even my love was helpless..

The night passes, but I remain there.
- On the footsteps of my porch, hoping for her to return.
Cursing the sea for drowning my love..

Thousands died.
Many lives were lost. And she was one of them.
The Tsunami took her away from me, and her body was not yet found.
People have given up hope, because many more were missing.
Everyone lost something or the other in the Tsunami. And I lost the person I was going to spend my life with..

I broke the promise of never letting her drown..

(Cont..)

Comments

  1. Miss CortniSeptember 24, 2011 at 8:56 AM

    Oh so sad :( but very nice :)

    - missshesaid.blogspot.com <3

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  2. Superrrnickkk...!!!!September 24, 2011 at 9:39 AM

    Aaahhh...!!! :( Its sad.. I thought it was going to be a love story..!!! but lovely words.. You are at your best..!!! :)

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  3. OvaisSeptember 24, 2011 at 11:08 AM

    This was sad, and yet.. peaceful.
    Or maybe it's the music I'm listening to.

    But.. you write much better than I do :)

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  4. Brian MillerSeptember 24, 2011 at 2:02 PM

    oh this stings...esp in light of all the joy in the first post...

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  5. Red HandedSeptember 24, 2011 at 3:47 PM

    Umm sad...Y Y Y ? Okie i do like sad endings but still!
    Looved reading it and thnx for this awesome sequel.ing it and thnx for this awesome sequel.

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  6. suvaibaSeptember 25, 2011 at 12:54 AM

    omg
    i know it sad but its written beautifully
    sometimes man
    and sometimes nature all work best in destroying love..! :(
    thanks for the comment..! :)

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  7. CяystalSeptember 25, 2011 at 3:13 AM

    Oh my God :(
    Tsunami. Grrrahhhh ! I hate separations..

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  8. Jyoti MishraSeptember 25, 2011 at 7:33 AM

    poignant... but a lovely read.
    Touched my heart !!!

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  9. Blasphemous AestheteSeptember 25, 2011 at 8:25 AM

    And He's still waiting, such is love. Darn!
    Who can stand against the might of nature and the will of God?

    Nice read.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  10. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 25, 2011 at 10:10 AM

    Hmm.. i got a dream today on Tsunami.. somehow ur post touched me even more..

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  11. Ed PilollaSeptember 25, 2011 at 9:10 PM

    a tragedy, but this is life. very well written.

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  12. ShamaSeptember 25, 2011 at 10:41 PM

    Good damn..... you are awesome :)
    love ya x

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