Thursday, September 15, 2011

Our hearts, Our love..

Your anger, my fear.
My tears, your heart ache..
Our pain,
Waiting for it to end.

My eyes, your sorrow,
My cries, your love.
Your anger, fading..
Your hands, reaching out to hold mine.

My heart, crumpling,
Your arms - My castle
Pulling me close,

I lie there..
Letting your warmth
Ease our pain.

Our eyes, locked onto each others,
My tears, you wipe.
To you, I cling..
The fragile me,
You hold tight.

Your love, my heart.
My heart, you love.

Our journey together..
Will never end!


  1. I hope it never shall either :)
    The write up is put together well ..
    Here for the first time , good blog :]

  2. Awww...nothing like huggin your man and the feeling of being needed.lovely lines.

  3. RE: i did..i showed my 2 paintings here -->

  4. And hey, I am following you now. :)

  5. and the journey shall continue with more love :)

  6. May this lovely journey where the two loved are strong supports for each, never end.

    Nice read.

    Blasphemous Aesthete

  7. :) yeyie i came back...! great poem and a different style of rhyming that i have seen for the 1st time..!
    and i have posted it ..! :P

  8. Lovely! Did you write this? :)

    Also, I like your blog, so I guess I'll be following you from now on. :)

  9. @ Crystal: Thank you for dropping by :)

    @ Red Handed: Thank you :) Everyone likes the feeling of warmth and safety :)

    @ Ayu: Will check it out :)

    @ Chintan: Hoping that it does not end :)

    @ Blasphemous Aesthete: Glad you liked it :) Thanks a ton :)

    @ Suvaiba: Thank you :) Will surely check out your story!

    @ Valli: Thank you :)

    @ My day in a sentence: Yes I did write it :) So glad you liked my blog :) Thank you for following!

  10. @ Sunil: Thank You for dropping by and for following :)

  11. beautiful expressions !!!

    I wish too, tht it never ends !!!


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