The L()vely N!ght



The cold breeze blows so softly,
As I stand in my backyard...
I feel it dig into my skin,
It's as if it's whispering something to me!

The half moon in the sky,
Swaying along behind the trees...
Half hidden itself, it's so amazing to see...
How it's guarding us so well!

The stars around the moon,
That stick to the sky,
They're so far away from us...
Yet it's so wonderful to see,
How they're out to give us some light!

Why can't we be...
Like the breeze, the moon, and the stars,
That are so full of themselves,
Yet it's so great to see them come out,
Just to support the blank sky!

Comments

  1. Romans 12:2November 6, 2008 at 8:34 AM

    Hahaha. - Bob

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  2. lone poetNovember 6, 2008 at 3:53 PM

    nice poem, nice picture :P lol

    and ok, sounds good to me :P lol

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  3. *::♫♪♥'.victoria.'♥♪♫::*November 6, 2008 at 6:04 PM

    i love the poem and the picture! =)

    haha and i will

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  4. AnonymousNovember 7, 2008 at 2:47 AM

    its annoying how every stanza ends with an exclamation mark

    i know it is meaningless and petty... but i couldnt help but notice it. it just seems unprofressional.

    no offense lol

    krl

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  5. AnonymousNovember 7, 2008 at 3:14 AM

    indeed, but i wasnt criticizing your work. im too afraid of offending you anymore. but i will criticize it if you like.

    would you like me to?

    krl

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  6. Helennn LouiseNovember 7, 2008 at 4:39 AM

    Hey, love the poem.

    And Yeah, I am on that proboard, anything a matter?

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  7. lone poetNovember 7, 2008 at 5:02 AM

    i no!!! it is awesome!!!

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  8. jEeRoNovember 7, 2008 at 5:33 AM

    tHe picture really suits the poem =>..love both..
    U GO GAL!!!!!
    n thkx for that lovely comment..
    hav a fun weekend!

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  9. Helennn LouiseNovember 7, 2008 at 6:45 AM

    oh, okay :D

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  10. AnonymousNovember 7, 2008 at 7:28 AM

    hey thanx for the comment and you should see it

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  11. DibsyNovember 7, 2008 at 7:36 AM

    OMG! Did you draw that?!

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  12. Romans 12:2November 7, 2008 at 7:55 AM

    Yeah. - Bob

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  13. AliNovember 7, 2008 at 11:44 AM

    thanks for commenting! i know, im so excited!!! thanks for loving my blog and playlist!! i like your blog too! :D

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  14. lanelareauNovember 7, 2008 at 1:07 PM

    Hey, glad you like my blog! I like the poem! =)

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  15. lone poetNovember 7, 2008 at 1:41 PM

    lol

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  16. AnonymousNovember 7, 2008 at 2:41 PM

    I like the poem. See ya on the boards!

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  17. mariposaNovember 7, 2008 at 7:48 PM

    Awesome poem! :) & I love the picture too.

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  18. Sakhi.November 13, 2008 at 10:26 PM

    nice poem nd cool pic!!

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