Safe Haven
The cold wind hits my face hard. I cling on to him, as he zooms. It’s dark. It’s cold. And I’m numb. I bury my head into his jacket, and hold on as tight as possible. Closing my eyes, with my hands inside his jacket’s pockets, I take in as much of his warmth as I could. We don’t say a word. It’s too cold to talk. When I look behind, there are no vehicles. Ahead of us, there are none either. It was just us. It was just me, with the only person I’ve ever wanted to be with. Fast driving has always given me the creeps. But sitting behind him, I wasn’t scared at all. I let him sweep me away. The moments…they were just magical! And trust me, when I say so, it really felt like that. We drive for hours. By the time we reach, I cannot move. The fog slowly starts clearing, as we climb the cliff. And when I cannot pull myself up, he lends me his hand. We stand there, on the cliff, watching the sunrise, letting the warmth reach us, and he still holds on to my hand. I wasn’t very cold any ...
That the one who made me cry,
ReplyDeleteCan only make me smile.
so true for most....
Uh a lot of sadness.thx 4 visiting.
ReplyDeletetell u something.? the best. dard dard dard, but no disco. ahah.
ReplyDeleteanyway, jokes apart. it's nice. and wonderful. I felt the same when she said such things
gud....i mean xellent....but do u mean it??
ReplyDeleteit was bang on!! beautiful..
ReplyDeleteEverything ll be fine.
ReplyDeleteAnother great poem! This one was so sad, but absolutely beautiful. Keep writing.
ReplyDeleteBrutally honest poem in a way, that's the thing I liked the most about this one... and the way you told the tale in such limited number of words is quite commendable too. Good work, keep them coming...
ReplyDeleteLove the poem :)
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The words become more meaningful to me as I have went through such a situation. But trust me on one thing, "Life moves on, no matter what"
ReplyDeleteYou really can por emotionms into your words...go girl..keep on blogging.
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That was beautiful, sad but beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteHi Juhi
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting my blog...Nice one...Keep Writing :)
Dnt worry...There is something really nice awaiting for u..
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