Broken Heart

You just walked away.
You didn't even care about what I felt.
You said it was over....so easily
That it was hard for me to believe.
You asked me not to cry,
Said I'll find a better guy.
But honey,
Why can't you see...
That the one who made me cry,
Can only make me smile.
And that's no other but YOU!

Comments

  1. अविनाशMarch 5, 2009 at 2:40 AM

    That the one who made me cry,
    Can only make me smile.

    so true for most....

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  2. MusicManiacMarch 5, 2009 at 2:50 AM

    Uh a lot of sadness.thx 4 visiting.

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  3. AnonymousMarch 5, 2009 at 3:38 AM

    tell u something.? the best. dard dard dard, but no disco. ahah.

    anyway, jokes apart. it's nice. and wonderful. I felt the same when she said such things

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  4. Sakhi.March 5, 2009 at 3:51 AM

    gud....i mean xellent....but do u mean it??

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  5. AnonymousMarch 5, 2009 at 5:06 AM

    it was bang on!! beautiful..

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  6. TonyMarch 5, 2009 at 6:38 AM

    Everything ll be fine.

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  7. TaraMarch 5, 2009 at 7:31 AM

    Another great poem! This one was so sad, but absolutely beautiful. Keep writing.

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  8. Arnab MajumdarMarch 5, 2009 at 7:41 AM

    Brutally honest poem in a way, that's the thing I liked the most about this one... and the way you told the tale in such limited number of words is quite commendable too. Good work, keep them coming...

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  9. HaNdPrInT_oN_tHe_WiNdOwMarch 5, 2009 at 9:00 AM

    Love the poem :)
    Do you like Avril Lavigne?

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  10. Arun GeorgeMarch 5, 2009 at 6:58 PM

    The words become more meaningful to me as I have went through such a situation. But trust me on one thing, "Life moves on, no matter what"

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  11. UnknownMarch 6, 2009 at 12:30 AM

    You really can por emotionms into your words...go girl..keep on blogging.


    http://deftlydaft.blogspot.com/2009/01/lonesome-valley-chapter-1.html

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  12. The_BrainMarch 6, 2009 at 8:20 PM

    That was beautiful, sad but beautiful :)

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  13. TabithaMarch 6, 2009 at 10:53 PM

    Hi Juhi
    Thanks for visiting my blog...Nice one...Keep Writing :)

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  14. TabithaMarch 6, 2009 at 10:56 PM

    Dnt worry...There is something really nice awaiting for u..

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