Thursday, March 5, 2009

Broken Heart

You just walked away.
You didn't even care about what I felt.
You said it was over....so easily
That it was hard for me to believe.
You asked me not to cry,
Said I'll find a better guy.
But honey,
Why can't you see...
That the one who made me cry,
Can only make me smile.
And that's no other but YOU!

14 comments:

  1. That the one who made me cry,
    Can only make me smile.

    so true for most....

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  2. Uh a lot of sadness.thx 4 visiting.

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  3. tell u something.? the best. dard dard dard, but no disco. ahah.

    anyway, jokes apart. it's nice. and wonderful. I felt the same when she said such things

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  4. gud....i mean xellent....but do u mean it??

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  5. Another great poem! This one was so sad, but absolutely beautiful. Keep writing.

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  6. Brutally honest poem in a way, that's the thing I liked the most about this one... and the way you told the tale in such limited number of words is quite commendable too. Good work, keep them coming...

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  7. Love the poem :)
    Do you like Avril Lavigne?

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  8. The words become more meaningful to me as I have went through such a situation. But trust me on one thing, "Life moves on, no matter what"

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  9. You really can por emotionms into your words...go girl..keep on blogging.


    http://deftlydaft.blogspot.com/2009/01/lonesome-valley-chapter-1.html

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  10. That was beautiful, sad but beautiful :)

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  11. Hi Juhi
    Thanks for visiting my blog...Nice one...Keep Writing :)

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  12. Dnt worry...There is something really nice awaiting for u..

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Your words mean a lot :)