Sunday, March 29, 2009

Emotions.Gone!


It’s hurting.
It’s paining.
Your doings are pinching my heart hard.
I’m fading.
I’m bleeding.
I’m dying.
And you’re just standing.
Watching!
Love.
You said you loved me.
Care!
Said I was your world.
But now you’re gone.
You say it’s all the same…
But it’s not.
You’ve changed.
It’s all different
Cause I’m dying,
And it’s as if you’re glad!


17 comments:

  1. i really like it! and your new background, its very nice. :)

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  2. yea that was cold

    i like that last line it really brings out that darkside of ther other person, pure irony

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  3. Dark Poetry again, and wonderfully laid out too. And, I hope it's based on fiction...?

    Kiddin' :P Cheers...

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  4. hey, tht was cool!
    i hope its a fiction!!!

    cheers
    swetha

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  5. very painful, just really hope you dont have to go through anything like that..

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  6. nice !! the last line was just perfect !

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  7. I am amazed!!! A couple of additional lines there, a tweak in structure and you have a pop song there. Great job!!! Keep writing!!!

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  8. You've just been awarded!!! Congratulations!!! Visit my spot for the award!!!

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  9. Ooh I love it! And I always love your pics!

    I'm sorry I've been gone for so long! I've been SO busy with life recently that I almost forgot to keep living it!

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  10. nice one. And again, it's while you have ur exams. Good and great. :)

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  11. Hey! I finally posted on my story! I don't know if you're still hooked on my story but here's the link.
    itsaboygirlstory.blogpsot.com

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  12. beautiful ~~~ such pain ! ur bblog is so colorful and full of life ...

    cheerio gurl !!

    adisha

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  13. Hmmmm..thats very true...

    it happens with most of the poeple who live in emotional homes...

    Hope that didnt really ahppne to you :)

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  14. wow.. hmm.. ur 15? why so sad at such a young age?
    brilliantly captured nonetheless..:)

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  15. very expressive.....gooood....its the words speakin not the lines....

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Your words mean a lot :)