Emotions.Gone!


It’s hurting.
It’s paining.
Your doings are pinching my heart hard.
I’m fading.
I’m bleeding.
I’m dying.
And you’re just standing.
Watching!
Love.
You said you loved me.
Care!
Said I was your world.
But now you’re gone.
You say it’s all the same…
But it’s not.
You’ve changed.
It’s all different
Cause I’m dying,
And it’s as if you’re glad!

Comments

  1. AnonymousMarch 29, 2009 at 6:44 AM

    wow. THat' really cute.

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  2. Sakhi.March 29, 2009 at 6:57 AM

    short n sweet:)\
    nice layout too!!

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  3. VictoriaMarch 29, 2009 at 7:11 AM

    i really like it! and your new background, its very nice. :)

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  4. NotionMarch 29, 2009 at 1:50 PM

    yea that was cold

    i like that last line it really brings out that darkside of ther other person, pure irony

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  5. Arnab MajumdarMarch 30, 2009 at 1:30 AM

    Dark Poetry again, and wonderfully laid out too. And, I hope it's based on fiction...?

    Kiddin' :P Cheers...

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  6. Swetha PadakandlaMarch 30, 2009 at 3:04 AM

    hey, tht was cool!
    i hope its a fiction!!!

    cheers
    swetha

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  7. LenaMarch 31, 2009 at 5:08 AM

    very painful, just really hope you dont have to go through anything like that..

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  8. AnonymousMarch 31, 2009 at 11:07 PM

    nice !! the last line was just perfect !

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  9. OpaqueApril 2, 2009 at 12:31 AM

    I am amazed!!! A couple of additional lines there, a tweak in structure and you have a pop song there. Great job!!! Keep writing!!!

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  10. OpaqueApril 2, 2009 at 12:39 AM

    You've just been awarded!!! Congratulations!!! Visit my spot for the award!!!

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  11. SavyApril 2, 2009 at 2:33 PM

    Ooh I love it! And I always love your pics!

    I'm sorry I've been gone for so long! I've been SO busy with life recently that I almost forgot to keep living it!

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  12. NeoDharmarApril 3, 2009 at 5:10 AM

    nice one. And again, it's while you have ur exams. Good and great. :)

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  13. AnonymousApril 7, 2009 at 12:24 PM

    Hey! I finally posted on my story! I don't know if you're still hooked on my story but here's the link.
    itsaboygirlstory.blogpsot.com

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  14. AdishaApril 8, 2009 at 4:46 PM

    beautiful ~~~ such pain ! ur bblog is so colorful and full of life ...

    cheerio gurl !!

    adisha

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  15. Mahesh SindbandgeApril 10, 2009 at 6:07 AM

    Hmmmm..thats very true...

    it happens with most of the poeple who live in emotional homes...

    Hope that didnt really ahppne to you :)

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  16. Miss SunshineApril 20, 2009 at 3:55 AM

    wow.. hmm.. ur 15? why so sad at such a young age?
    brilliantly captured nonetheless..:)

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  17. AnonymousApril 21, 2009 at 5:52 AM

    very expressive.....gooood....its the words speakin not the lines....

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