Tuesday, March 10, 2009

The Best Th!ng ! ()wn

You took my hand in yours
Pulled me close, and caught me by my waist.
Locked your eyes into mine,
And made me move along
With the music that played behind.

Your warm touch,
Sailed right through my skin,
Our toes moved together
While all we cared about, was 'us'.

The music stopped,
You sat on your knees.
Held yours arms wide open...
Smiled and said,
You wanted to be with me.

I'd waited all along,
I had even given up on you.
But, finally the day came,
When I actually got the feeling of you.

I love everything about you
And I still have a view of that day in my eyes.
You're mine, and I'm glad,
Cause you're the best thing I own!


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16 comments:

  1. The music stopped,
    You sat on your knees.
    Held yours arms wide open...
    Smiled and said,
    You wanted to be with me.

    Excellent buddy

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  2. nice. It's really nice. Hope she thinks the same for me. lol

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  3. Nice poem, like always... you're rekindling that thing I had for poems a long time ago.. :)

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  4. all we cared about, was us .. awesome !!

    Big dhamaka : small package ;) hehhehe. U are the Cutest ever ...

    Cheers sweti,
    adisha

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  5. adding u to my blog roll, hope u don't mind ...

    Cheers,
    adisha

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  8. U write so well dear...(:
    Happy holi sweets....hope u had a galla time

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  9. wowwwww! so darn roantic and beautiful :)

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  10. wow! that's a great poem... yeah, the eyes are mine except they really don't look that nice in real life.

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  11. love it love it! tis is a good one

    oh thankyou much!

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  12. hiii juhi i loved it.keep it up ,check out my new post

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  13. hiiiiiiii juhi i loved it
    dear

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Your words mean a lot :)