Cupcake Love :) (part 2)


Luke.
Yes, he is the guy I've been crushing over since the past two years! He is all over my mind. He gives me tingles in my tummy. And he makes me go weak on my knees.
Positive side: He's my brother's best friend. So he's always around.
Negative side: He's my 'BROTHER'S' best friend. My brother who always treats me like a baby!

Mike is just two years older than I am. But, he treats me like a six year old even though I'm sixteen! But Luke didn't do that. He's always there when I need someone to talk to. He took me out to the movies and bought me gifts.
Jessie says that these are all signs. She thinks he likes me back. But I don't know. He's never told me.. Why would he not tell me? Maybe cause I'm Mike's sister..?
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JessieJ: It's been freaking two years girl! Maybe he's just scared. Stop being nervous and just make the move stupid!
Maria: I can't. What if he does not respond?
JessieJ: At least you'll get to know if he likes you back or not.
Maria: Umm..you have a point. Let's see.
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Luke: How's it going? :)
Maria: Nothing really. Just bored.
Luke: Oh right.. Everyone's at your granny's place, yea?
Maria: Yup. And I ain't got anything to do :(
Luke: Want me to come over? We can watch movies! :)
Maria: Ok. Cool :)

-Luke_149 has signed out-
-Maria_cupcake has signed out-
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Cool? Did I seriously say that? No ways. I'm nervous! Did I actually ask him to come over? No I didn't. He himself made the proposal! But then, why did I agree? Cause I like him, right? No. Not like. I'm truly, madly and deeply in love with him!

Okay.. I need to calm down. It's going to be fine.
Deep breaths.
One..
Two..
..The doorbell rings!
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(to be continued)
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Comments

  1. Confused SoulDecember 5, 2011 at 11:56 PM

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  2. Confused SoulDecember 5, 2011 at 11:57 PM

    Maybe because she's Mike's sister...or maybe it's just a sweet friendly gesture or maybe here are some intentions... aaahh you keep me guessing PhilO .. Continue :D

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  3. MenacheryDecember 6, 2011 at 1:04 AM

    i like the way you have described her apprehensions.. they are so perfect for a girl her age :)

    Im waiting to read the next bit. so Finally he is coming over ...

    P:S - i feel like alil kid now :P

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  4. ShreyaDecember 6, 2011 at 1:12 AM

    Lovey, I love reading these parts. Love the way you write :) ♥

    I'll be back soon to read next part. :) xx

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  5. OvaisDecember 6, 2011 at 2:28 AM

    Don't do this! I want to read more :P

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  6. Brian MillerDecember 6, 2011 at 4:00 AM

    oh perfect place to leave off to leave us wanting for more...nice....

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  7. ShamaDecember 6, 2011 at 4:13 AM

    hahahaha Interesting -
    Cupcake love - cute :)

    waiting for part- III

    love x

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  8. Pramoda MeduriDecember 6, 2011 at 5:16 AM

    Hi Gal..u bring nice write ups.. especially abt the girl and her sensible feelings..

    i love them.. keep up the good work..

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  9. Sakhi.December 6, 2011 at 5:35 AM

    Brother's best friend. :p

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  10. AnonymousDecember 6, 2011 at 5:58 AM

    Waiting *desperate* , like everyone else. Comeon quick.. start writing :D

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  11. Sujatha SathyaDecember 6, 2011 at 8:48 AM

    do you write the whole story but serve us in parts???????

    i want to be in love - again - as a teen!!!!

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  12. AnonymousDecember 6, 2011 at 10:18 AM

    Oooh can't wait to see what happens:D

    Tay
    x

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  13. Rahul BhatiaDecember 6, 2011 at 5:54 PM

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  14. Rahul BhatiaDecember 6, 2011 at 5:55 PM

    PhilO- The sweet little master of intrigue! Waiting for next..

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  15. ChandanaDecember 6, 2011 at 9:06 PM

    Ahhh.. teenage! Reminds of my own love story ;)
    Nice one.. waiting for the next part :)

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  16. ExpressDecember 7, 2011 at 3:27 AM

    SHIT!
    I cant wait for the next post!!!!

    P.S. My first crush was my brother's best friend too :P

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  17. Jyoti MishraDecember 7, 2011 at 5:25 AM

    read both the cup cakes :D
    waiting 4 more !!

    Awesome read as ever !!

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  18. The PoetDecember 7, 2011 at 1:20 PM

    Hello.
    I love the scene setting of this. Very real indeed. You give us enough to hold our attention & leave us wanting more.
    Nice job!
    Now off to pt.3
    Thanks for sharing.

    For ref:
    Eleven Roses And You

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  19. Red HandedDecember 8, 2011 at 11:26 PM

    ooooooooooooh. I want him to like Maria baccck!! Let me read the next part now!

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  20. Sri ValliDecember 9, 2011 at 12:53 AM

    You are narrating...as if it is happening right in front of my eyes....beautiful

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