Wednesday, May 5, 2010

Separate Ways..

Things have changed,
We both know they have.
We have drifted away,
It’s visible…
So why hide the patch we have built,
In our hearts for each other…

It’s not like before any longer,
We can both see it,
The love is fading away
So, why deny?

We thought we were perfect for each other,
But maybe we’re just not meant to be together!
Nobody’s to blame,
Cause we were both mistaken.

I care for you,
And I know you do too.
But we just don’t click together,
It’s a fact and you know it too.

I can’t take it any longer,
This fakeness has been going on since long.
I can no longer see that shine in your eyes,
And I can no longer feel my heart beat with yours.

Maybe it’s just temporary,
Maybe we just need to get away.
Stay away from each other for a little while,
And see what happens.

I know you feel trapped,
It’s the same here…
The only difference is,
You don’t speak up.
But trust me,

I know what your eyes speak,
I recognize the hidden feelings you keep within.

They say,
‘Set your love free’!
And that’s what I want to do.
If our love is true, we’ll land up together,
And if we don’t, it means we were never meant to be together!



  1. superb!!....
    reading this i feel as if every teenager goes thu same kinda circumstances...the relationships tht v consider everlasting or eternal somewhere find der end...somehow it happens wid evryone...:(
    nice flow!!

  2. Your most mature poem till date !!! Keep going...nd entertaining

  3. OMG, awesumly written

    You perfectly described this stuff, so many teens feel the same way! :( Not only teens actually many people! :( sad!

  4. hellooo hearty.. superbly written with lotzz of expressions..

    missed u much..keep up the good work..

  5. Wow! :)
    I think this one, like the others was truly beautiful.
    I can relate to your posts so many times and this is one of it. :)
    I guess it is the write hting to do, and you've done a great job again, keep it up. :D

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  7. Juhi,

    Very true. A time comes in every relationship when it becomes too predictable and mundane, that is when little seperation is needed to rekindle flame. Expressed superbly.

    Take care

  8. isn't it funny how we have grown up to think that love is forever...n how sometimes it actually starts fading!

  9. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

    awww.. definitely a nice yet heart-breaking post! so captivating!>.< i feel sorry for couples like that..

    (p.s. check out my latest post if you have time,,.thanks :3)


  10. so expressive! something almost everything has felt, and you wrote it so nicely :)

  11. RE: Awh, thanks. (:

    This is a beautiful poem. So deep. I really like it.

  12. You are a talented girl and I want to thank you, young lady for caring enough about an 80 year old to wish me good health. Spunky is sending you a special thank you for me.

  13. When you recognize that the feeling are not the same as they were ,It's time to move on and try to be make best of what you've got.

    This happens to every1 at some time in life, Friends or lovers drift apart. Life is journey and you'll meet a lot of travelers,some will stay for a while...some won't.
    You can't choose. You can enjoy if u want to. It's all in your hands to suffer or to have fun.

    //Set you love free and all that crap //... I used to like that when I read about it. But in reality , it never happens.Exceptions are there though.
    In time you'll see and learn for yourself.

    take care


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