BettER OfF WitHOut YoU !

You’re kicked out.
The doors of my heart have closed for you.
You made me throw away the key
And now I don’t need you.

You made me cry
You played with my heart.
You tore me apart,
While you went out
Living your dreams!

I was such a fool
To think you loved me.
My heart must me weak
Cause your sweet fake talks melted me.

You pretended to love me
And when you got bored,
You left and dumped me
Like a piece of thrash!

You put the blame on me
Said I was a liar.
You said all kinds of shit
You treated me like crap.

Yes, I cried.
I was a fool to do so.
Cause I should have known you were fake
Your love was a lie
I was a fool to believe you all this time!

But don’t we say, love is blind?

But now I’m done with it.
I’m back and up on my feet.
I’m happy you left
I’m happy you opened my eyes.

I’m a new me and I so don’t need you.
I’m better off without you.

My life is too beautiful
For letting a guy like you ruin it!

I’m not crying over you.
You haven’t won yet.

You said,
Time heals everything.
This time,
Time will show you what you have lost!

Comments

  1. LucyMay 24, 2010 at 6:09 AM

    I love your poems. If it was left in real life I would say, good riddance. If he can not see the beautiful girl you are.

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  2. Sakhi.May 24, 2010 at 6:16 AM

    now tht u r single all over once again, ur writing stuff has changed :D
    gud one!!
    nicely scripted :)

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  3. JackMay 24, 2010 at 8:18 AM

    Juhi,

    Courageous one. Once one realises the fakeness of partner it is best to move on and find life afresh without fretting over what happened.

    Take care

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  4. Suhina :)May 24, 2010 at 8:29 AM

    I always do love your poem, and this one is somehow still very optimistic, and i love the decision of the poet to be strong and fight.
    Well done. :)

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  5. ShritiMay 24, 2010 at 8:59 AM

    awesome :D

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  6. SonshuMay 24, 2010 at 10:15 AM

    Aaaw

    HE isnt worth you. Let go of him! Ive told ya already...HE NEVER WAS WORTH IT.

    MCP. lol.
    :)) IM GLAD your finding ways to let go!: )

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  7. LeonaMay 24, 2010 at 10:57 AM

    He's not worth it if he can't see your worth, right? ;)

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  8. Blunt EdgesMay 25, 2010 at 12:01 AM

    "Time will show you what you have lost!"

    cool closing line that! :)

    n loved the powerful words in the poem...feels very honest! :)

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  9. FreelancerMay 25, 2010 at 9:20 AM

    lovely!!! i loved the last part

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  10. rainboyMay 26, 2010 at 4:36 AM

    Now you're talking ! ;D

    Be self-sufficient egoistic dear.
    Kick ass...

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  11. AnonymousMay 26, 2010 at 4:47 AM

    Nice expression my dear! Go girl! He doesn't know what he's missing.. It's definitely his loss.

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  12. SidMay 27, 2010 at 9:56 AM

    Hey first visit here... gr8 read :)

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  13. UnknownMay 28, 2010 at 8:52 AM

    Go kick some asses..

    Very nice..:)

    Cheers

    Nuts

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  14. RitikaJuly 2, 2010 at 1:42 AM

    wow.. amazing, it was similar to wat i wanted to put it down in words.. loved it..!! awesome courage and awesome you..!!

    Time will show you what you have lost! loved it..!!

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