Under The Duvet Lies Us :)


Soft Touch,
Strong grip..
Your gentle lips
Touch mine.

Warm hands
Lingering over my body
Your desperate mouth
Biting into my skin.

Broad shoulders
Engulfing me..
Racing heartbeats,
Intense longing

Heavy breaths
Our eyes locking

Under a duvet
On a cold winter night
We unite..


Picture: Google :)

Comments

  1. ArundhatiJanuary 18, 2012 at 10:32 PM

    WHoa! Nice! :) :)

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  2. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 18, 2012 at 10:42 PM

    Great passionate poetry!

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  3. bardJanuary 18, 2012 at 11:36 PM

    Wow!

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  4. Sujatha SathyaJanuary 19, 2012 at 12:11 AM

    where do u get all these lovely photographs from? they add a touch to your awesome poetry

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  5. NehaJanuary 19, 2012 at 2:30 AM

    Superb poetry! Passionate and innocent.

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  6. SoniaJanuary 19, 2012 at 2:52 AM

    WOW. Beautiful piece.:)Picture is best suitable for all the lines u wrote. As always u r the best.:)

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  7. MarkJanuary 19, 2012 at 4:14 AM

    That was really nice.

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  8. SagittarianJanuary 19, 2012 at 4:52 AM

    Oh, great:) Ummm..? Thanks for sharing well written poetry! :) Smile..:)

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  9. Brian MillerJanuary 19, 2012 at 7:08 AM

    oo la la sounds like you will be staying warm tonight...

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  10. JackJanuary 19, 2012 at 7:54 AM

    Philo,

    Passion with love at it's peak. Leaves one captivated.

    Take care

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  11. AnjuliJanuary 19, 2012 at 9:29 AM

    I want to be under the duvet right now as it is very cold here. Very passionate poem.

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  12. Red HandedJanuary 19, 2012 at 9:59 AM

    so full of passion...
    Beautiful!

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  13. Saru SinghalJanuary 19, 2012 at 8:30 PM

    Intense...:) Loved the last lines...

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  14. --January 19, 2012 at 11:15 PM

    WoW!!! That was awesome writing and very PASSIONATE! Woo hoo ;) Loved it! :-)

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  15. Selvaggia CapizziJanuary 20, 2012 at 12:36 AM

    Beautiful poetry!!

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  16. SoumyaJanuary 20, 2012 at 3:57 AM

    I seriously have goose bumps after reading this!!

    Love it!

    Bring it on, more!

    Cheers,
    Soumya

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  17. Ridx January 20, 2012 at 4:12 AM

    who wrote this? :D
    you?
    its so cute :D

    and i <3 the pic too. :D
    Bdw you can check out the pics from
    www.weheartit.com
    you might like it. :D

    http://mycupppaaacofffeee.blogspot.com/

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  18. Sri ValliJanuary 20, 2012 at 4:32 AM

    That was romantic <3
    You write romantic posts very neatly :)

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  19. RahulJanuary 20, 2012 at 5:21 AM

    Sooooooooooooooooooooooppperrrb!!!!!:-D

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  20. mikexplorerJanuary 20, 2012 at 6:59 AM

    hi there.. how are you? Happy weekend to you..

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  21. Vijay MenonJanuary 20, 2012 at 10:31 AM

    Loved that :D

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  22. Vijay MenonJanuary 20, 2012 at 10:43 AM

    Ah! Forgot one thing. You gotto teach me write poems

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  23. IrfanuddinJanuary 20, 2012 at 7:37 PM

    lovely words....and yes the sold does give a chance to come closer n unite.....:))

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  24. vijayantJanuary 20, 2012 at 10:17 PM

    Hi new one, great lines. I found 100 reasons to follow ur blogs.

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  25. AnonymousJanuary 20, 2012 at 11:00 PM

    Sexy :P lol and really good :D

    I've awarded you on my blog! Don't forget to claim it :)

    Tay
    x

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  26. Sakhi.January 21, 2012 at 12:08 AM

    aha. :D

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  27. Anil SawanJanuary 21, 2012 at 2:29 AM

    oooo winter has its effect on people :P

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  28. AnonymousJanuary 21, 2012 at 3:07 AM

    Now this was sexy :D

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  29. Confused SoulJanuary 21, 2012 at 4:49 AM

    wow .. :)

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  30. Dreaming Wanderer. www.tonightidream-iwander.blogspot.comJanuary 23, 2012 at 12:11 AM

    so romantic and sexy!!

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  31. AnandJanuary 26, 2012 at 9:09 AM

    whoa.. whatte expression!! so passionate... woohoo!! :)
    Cheers!!

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  32. Craig WatsonJanuary 29, 2012 at 5:35 PM

    Love the Passion ! Great write !

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  33. CJFebruary 19, 2012 at 5:16 AM

    Intense emotions described beautifully...Loved it :)
    And hey, got time to read many of your previous posts, finally!...you're too good :)

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