Wednesday, January 18, 2012

Under The Duvet Lies Us :)


Soft Touch,
Strong grip..
Your gentle lips
Touch mine.

Warm hands
Lingering over my body
Your desperate mouth
Biting into my skin.

Broad shoulders
Engulfing me..
Racing heartbeats,
Intense longing

Heavy breaths
Our eyes locking

Under a duvet
On a cold winter night
We unite..


Picture: Google :)

35 comments:

  1. where do u get all these lovely photographs from? they add a touch to your awesome poetry

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  2. Superb poetry! Passionate and innocent.

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  3. WOW. Beautiful piece.:)Picture is best suitable for all the lines u wrote. As always u r the best.:)

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  4. Oh, great:) Ummm..? Thanks for sharing well written poetry! :) Smile..:)

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  5. oo la la sounds like you will be staying warm tonight...

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  6. Philo,

    Passion with love at it's peak. Leaves one captivated.

    Take care

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  7. I want to be under the duvet right now as it is very cold here. Very passionate poem.

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  8. Intense...:) Loved the last lines...

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  9. WoW!!! That was awesome writing and very PASSIONATE! Woo hoo ;) Loved it! :-)

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  10. I seriously have goose bumps after reading this!!

    Love it!

    Bring it on, more!

    Cheers,
    Soumya

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  11. who wrote this? :D
    you?
    its so cute :D

    and i <3 the pic too. :D
    Bdw you can check out the pics from
    www.weheartit.com
    you might like it. :D

    http://mycupppaaacofffeee.blogspot.com/

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  12. That was romantic <3
    You write romantic posts very neatly :)

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  13. Sooooooooooooooooooooooppperrrb!!!!!:-D

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  14. hi there.. how are you? Happy weekend to you..

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  15. Ah! Forgot one thing. You gotto teach me write poems

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  16. lovely words....and yes the sold does give a chance to come closer n unite.....:))

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  17. Hi new one, great lines. I found 100 reasons to follow ur blogs.

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  18. Sexy :P lol and really good :D

    I've awarded you on my blog! Don't forget to claim it :)

    Tay
    x

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  19. oooo winter has its effect on people :P

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  20. whoa.. whatte expression!! so passionate... woohoo!! :)
    Cheers!!

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  21. Intense emotions described beautifully...Loved it :)
    And hey, got time to read many of your previous posts, finally!...you're too good :)

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Your words mean a lot :)