Rainfall Of Memories..


(Now..)

My coffee is cold. I have no intentions of drinking it. The cafe is about to close, but I do not move.
It's pouring outside..

I'm finally pushed out by the waiter. I ain't got no place to go to. Home feels empty without him even after so long..

I hurriedly walk wrapping my arms around myself. There are no taxis around. I stand under a tree, waiting for the rain to stop. I'm cold.
I'm lonely.

A car stops besides me.
"Do you want a lift?" He asks.
'Yes please' I say, and get in besides him.

I look at him, and he looks back at me. Our eyes meet. He holds my hands tight. "I knew I'd find you here." He whispers, as he comes closer to me.
"Walk me home, will you?" I ask.

He says nothing. We get out of the car and walk. There is silence.. But our hearts talk.
And when he pulls me close, and presses himself against me, our love reunites.

We spend the entire night on the steps, watching the rain fall, letting it bring back memories.. and letting the silence connect us once again!
........................................

With this I come to an end of my story :) Thank You to all of you for reading.

Love,
Philo

Comments

  1. ArundhatiJanuary 12, 2012 at 10:09 AM

    Nice end! :)

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  2. OvaisJanuary 12, 2012 at 10:11 AM

    Yes!!!!!!!
    I love the ending :D

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  3. AnjuliJanuary 12, 2012 at 11:02 AM

    I read through the last three posts- and this was a lovely ending. As I said previously, you write amazingly- what a talent you have!!!

    Keep writing, above all else, keep writing!

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  4. shash.destroyer@gmail.comJanuary 12, 2012 at 11:17 AM

    The best part?
    "I knew I'd find you here."

    stay blessed ^_^

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  5. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 12, 2012 at 11:25 AM

    Juhi, A simple love story so simply narrated ! Just no frills! Keep writing like this!

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  6. Pat HattJanuary 12, 2012 at 11:51 AM

    A true end to your tale, nicely done without fail.

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  7. SagittarianJanuary 12, 2012 at 3:12 PM

    This is so lovely,:) I love the feeling after reading it. The ending was so touching,! You made our mind and heart awake! This is really amazing! :) I love it! :)*smile*

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 12, 2012 at 3:56 PM

    Amazing ending...Lovely story! Keep Writing....!!! :)

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  9. Sujatha SathyaJanuary 12, 2012 at 6:43 PM

    love the way it ended

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  10. Misterio VidaJanuary 12, 2012 at 7:46 PM

    great romantic story... but you know here its sub-zero outside and even thinking of soaking in the rain and watching it all night and walking in it makes me shiver with cold... :)

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  11. ♥●• İzdihër •●♥January 12, 2012 at 9:01 PM

    loved it.

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  12. --January 12, 2012 at 10:20 PM

    Wonderful, sweet ending! I loved it :-)

    "We spend the entire night on the steps, watching the rain fall, letting it bring back memories.. and letting the silence connect us once again!"

    Fabulous! Especially the part about letting the silence connect again! :-) x0x

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  13. NehaJanuary 13, 2012 at 12:07 AM

    Perfect ending. Couldn't have been better :)

    Enjoyed the story

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  14. ✿Sie✿January 13, 2012 at 4:45 AM

    weeeeee..I knew it will have a happy ending..so comes the next days of endless love and romance..passing by Philo ;)

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  15. tharangniJanuary 13, 2012 at 4:54 AM

    Nice story! :)

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  16. Prime AqueJanuary 13, 2012 at 5:21 AM

    This is lovely and romantic my friend :)

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  17. IrfanuddinJanuary 13, 2012 at 5:32 AM

    hhmmmm...filled with romance....and i liked the end part of it very much...LOVELY....:))

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  18. Brian MillerJanuary 13, 2012 at 5:39 AM

    nice...love this...very tender...i like the sitting watching the rain...makes for a magical moment...

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  19. JackJanuary 13, 2012 at 8:17 AM

    Philo,

    A beautiful ending with lost love being reunited.

    Take care

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  20. Blasphemous AestheteJanuary 13, 2012 at 8:50 AM

    Good times return!

    That is nice.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  21. Helennn LouiseJanuary 13, 2012 at 10:33 AM

    Such a sweet moment and a great end to your story, lovely!

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  22. Ifrah YousufJanuary 13, 2012 at 6:50 PM

    Totally love the end!!!

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  23. Red HandedJanuary 13, 2012 at 8:27 PM

    No explanataions are needed when love is pure.
    Thiss was such a great ending!!

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  24. AnonymousJanuary 14, 2012 at 10:50 AM

    It was really a lovey-dovey post. "Awww" is the word that I have for it. Really beautiful story. :)

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  25. Sh@sJanuary 18, 2012 at 10:56 AM

    Sweet ending :)

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  26. Dreaming Wanderer. www.tonightidream-iwander.blogspot.comJanuary 28, 2012 at 12:06 AM

    loved this - "But our hearts talk" :)
    soulful :)

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