The cold wind hits my face hard. I cling on to him, as he zooms. It’s dark. It’s cold. And I’m numb. I bury my head into his jacket, and hold on as tight as possible. Closing my eyes, with my hands inside his jacket’s pockets, I take in as much of his warmth as I could. We don’t say a word. It’s too cold to talk. When I look behind, there are no vehicles. Ahead of us, there are none either. It was just us. It was just me, with the only person I’ve ever wanted to be with. Fast driving has always given me the creeps. But sitting behind him, I wasn’t scared at all. I let him sweep me away. The moments…they were just magical! And trust me, when I say so, it really felt like that. We drive for hours. By the time we reach, I cannot move. The fog slowly starts clearing, as we climb the cliff. And when I cannot pull myself up, he lends me his hand. We stand there, on the cliff, watching the sunrise, letting the warmth reach us, and he still holds on to my hand. I wasn’t very cold any ...
Simple and good!
ReplyDeletenice...i undrstnd da ends of ur lines...bt "an idicatn" can b chngd in2 a simpler word i thnk...Dat word is a bit heavy!!
ReplyDeleteU rayt damn well...keep goin...Hope u doin well now!
Take care...
Rugma...
Where do you get your pics? :O
ReplyDeleteHey,
ReplyDeleteI'm glad your doing better!
I'm okay
School started back up for me today ugh such a short summer.
Love ur posts((Yea where do you get ur pictures from cos they ROCK!))
Another great poem and once again, the picture matches it perfectly.
ReplyDeleteNice One!..How u doing..long time no c
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ReplyDeletethanks for stopping by my blog
enjoy ur day
very nice blog..holds your world into it.
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take care.
good one..!!
ReplyDeleteready 4 xams...??
howz ur timetabl??
Very nice. Gorgeous in its simplicity, but moving <3
ReplyDeleteAnd AH! This is the first time since I've been reading your blog that you didn't end your poem with an ! Lol, I like it better, though ;)
well written....the emotions portrayed are heart-warming
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