Death ()f L()ve

She stands in front of the mirror.
Water dripping from her body.
Her hair clings to her face
While tears roll down her checks.
She closes her eyes
And she sees him,
She opens them again
And stares hard at her reflection,
Trying to figure out what went wrong.
Said he'd love her till he dies.
As far as she knows,
He's still alive.
She cries her sorrow out,
But there's nobody to listen.
She smashes her reflection which she sees
In the mirror;
Sits down all alone in the corner.
And says
Cheers to the death of love, forever!

Comments

  1. OpaqueMay 8, 2009 at 11:46 PM

    Deep! Strong emotions here! Good one. Keep them coming!!!

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  2. Anil SawanMay 8, 2009 at 11:54 PM

    lot of pain there!! wish love is just in hibernation phase for her. wish she wud recover fast.

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  3. Arnab MajumdarMay 9, 2009 at 1:24 AM

    That phase doesn't really last forever... although at the time, it probably seems so.

    About the poem - now you see why I'm jealous?? :P

    Cheers, take care...

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  4. TabithaMay 9, 2009 at 8:24 AM

    I can relate to her...Feels a lot like me...Deep Thoughts!!!

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  5. DibsyMay 9, 2009 at 10:30 AM

    oooh, i like that girl's clothes in the piccy, i think i can buy those in hot topic... <3

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  6. Preetilata【ツ】May 9, 2009 at 11:45 AM

    awwwwww.... the pain has been etched beautifully by u juhi.

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  7. AdishaMay 9, 2009 at 4:30 PM

    Whats with the gloom baby gurl !!

    Highly volatile ...

    Cheers,
    adisha

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  8. LydiaMay 10, 2009 at 2:29 AM

    I loved it. Really raw emotions.

    sorry I havn't been on for a while. I've been away with my year.

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  9. AnonymousMay 10, 2009 at 6:51 AM

    Good one from you, once again! That's back to your style once again. There's determination towards something positive in the end. A shift towards positive.... keep it up!

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  10. Anna NhiMay 10, 2009 at 5:05 PM

    thanks for the kind comment. lovely poem, btw.

    did you write it?

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  11. TabithaMay 10, 2009 at 11:00 PM

    Hi Juhi
    How are you..long time....Havent heard from you...Take Care

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  12. PallavMay 11, 2009 at 12:21 AM

    Juhi..
    nw ths time u hv tell me frm whr did u get these thots..
    i mean i dieing to see ur talent..
    girl u gonna hit ths world..
    May god bless u..
    again another inspirational post frm u for me..
    i dnt think i can write smthng like ths in future...

    hope for the best..
    n thnak s for the comment..

    Pallav

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  13. AnonymousMay 17, 2009 at 5:00 AM

    Wow... it's beautiful
    Cheers to the death of love, forever! ):

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