I Got This Feelin... :D


I've always felt this thing,
When you look into my eye...
When you smile...
When our hands touch,
I get this amazing feeling
From deep within.

I can't help turning red
When you say my name.
I want to hear you say that
Again and again.
I don't feel like blinking my eyes
When you're around.
I don't want to miss a moment
Of not seeing you.

I spend hours in front of the mirror,
Every time I meet you,
I want to look different.
I want you to say that I'm beautiful
Each and everyday.
You sweep me off the ground,
I think I'm crazy for you!

When I told my friends about how I feel,
They just teased me
And I went even more red.
Mum says it's teenage!

I don't care what this is,
All I know is,
I want to feel this way forever.
I want you to freeze.
I want you to keep saying my name.
I want to play with your hair,
I want to watch you surf in the sea.
Lastly,
I want you to feel the same about me.

Comments

  1. deepsOctober 7, 2009 at 3:23 AM

    i wonder if you have to remin gazing at you infront of the mirror
    for differnce will be shown
    all over when captured by love
    na?

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  2. JackOctober 7, 2009 at 4:19 AM

    Juhi,

    Another good one full of love expressions. Keep writing.

    Take care

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  3. sulagna October 7, 2009 at 4:52 AM

    heyiii thats beautifully written for a 14 year old...but then...love makes you a genius at writing mush..and i absolutely dig mush!!!

    P.S:Thanks for dropping by

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  4. Pramoda MeduriOctober 7, 2009 at 7:09 AM

    hi juhi,

    soo innocent and pure feelings that u have shown...lovelyyy..:)

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  5. deepsOctober 7, 2009 at 8:32 AM

    oops ... i didnt see re ..

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  6. Yellow TulipOctober 7, 2009 at 10:20 AM

    aaha...:)...the last wish is too blissful:)...too good:)...soo ful of love:)..

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  7. Blunt EdgesOctober 7, 2009 at 10:29 AM

    very sweet poem that! :D

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  8. aritra the daydreamerOctober 7, 2009 at 10:47 AM

    nice poem........so wonderful depiction of feelings..

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  9. Bella_182October 7, 2009 at 2:26 PM

    Ugh can I cry now?? T_T

    Good.I hope you do better on your next test!

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  10. TaraOctober 7, 2009 at 5:14 PM

    Cute picture and very sweet poem! It reminds me of how I felt the first time I fell in love.

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  11. Paras ShahOctober 8, 2009 at 1:35 AM

    "I want you to feel the same about m

    e."

    THIS IS THE BEST LINE OF THE POEM

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  12. Hemanth PotluriOctober 8, 2009 at 9:40 PM

    its so nice

    urs..hemu..

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  13. workhardOctober 9, 2009 at 10:37 AM

    Very adorable...:)

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  14. mariposaOctober 10, 2009 at 5:58 PM

    That's so beautiful!! I love it :)

    Btw, thanks for the comment! Glad to be back :)

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  15. S.October 13, 2009 at 3:34 AM

    Beautiful blog.keep writting :)

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  16. ShritiOctober 13, 2009 at 7:45 AM

    hey juhi,

    nice blog.. i loved it :) keep blogging..

    ReplyDelete

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