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Am just so lonely without you.
So lost so scared,
I stand all alone.
Just wanna hold you,
Wanna feel you.
Can die
But just wanna be with you
Once again...

Comments

  1. Bella_182July 15, 2009 at 11:39 PM

    Hey,
    I'm good.Tired up good
    yourself?

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  2. Bella_182July 15, 2009 at 11:42 PM

    yes I love it.Ur very good
    studying sucks for me lol

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  3. Bella_182July 15, 2009 at 11:47 PM

    bye

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  4. JackJuly 16, 2009 at 12:30 AM

    Juhi,

    Lovely composition which expressed deep love.

    Take care

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  5. OpaqueJuly 16, 2009 at 5:06 AM

    Clichéd, yet, it carries a strong feel. Keep writing!!!

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  6. ash89July 16, 2009 at 5:10 AM

    I know exactly what ur feeling. But u really need to learn to face everything alone. Its important!
    HUGS!

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  7. DibsyJuly 16, 2009 at 12:38 PM

    Because whenever I try a poem that's supposed to be deep, I suddenly like launch into something different, until the poem totally loses its meaning. Dx So I just try silly. ^^

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  8. TaraJuly 16, 2009 at 2:55 PM

    Another great poem! I can relate to this one too. Actually, I think everybody can relate to this poem. We all feel lonely sometimes and when we do, we often wish for someone we love to be there and help us through it. Also, I sometimes find that when I feel lonely, I start to think about people I can't see or talk to anymore and miss them more than ever. I'll just wish that person could be with me at that moment.

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  9. Sakhi.July 17, 2009 at 8:11 AM

    hey.....cute one...!!
    guess wht?!!....now most probably i shall b posting regularly!!

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  10. Amal BoseJuly 19, 2009 at 11:46 PM

    nice poem.. loved it
    keep writing :-)

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  11. CRDJuly 20, 2009 at 5:18 AM

    U seem to depend too much on someone for your happiness.

    Hope ur free once again, sooner than later


    Cheers
    CRD

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  12. Sneha ShrivastavaJuly 20, 2009 at 1:13 PM

    very touching and deep.:)
    well done.:)

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  13. AnonymousJuly 20, 2009 at 2:21 PM

    why thanks! Hey I know I haven't been writing on that "It's a Boy Girl Story" for a while but there's one story that I've been writing currently. It's called "My Sister's Ex". If you have time come check it out! Here's the link: my-sisters-ex.blogspot.com

    Thanks!

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