Wednesday, July 15, 2009

Back T() Y()u...


Am just so lonely without you.
So lost so scared,
I stand all alone.
Just wanna hold you,
Wanna feel you.
Can die
But just wanna be with you
Once again...

13 comments:

  1. Hey,
    I'm good.Tired up good
    yourself?

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  2. yes I love it.Ur very good
    studying sucks for me lol

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  3. Juhi,

    Lovely composition which expressed deep love.

    Take care

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  4. Clichéd, yet, it carries a strong feel. Keep writing!!!

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  5. I know exactly what ur feeling. But u really need to learn to face everything alone. Its important!
    HUGS!

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  6. Because whenever I try a poem that's supposed to be deep, I suddenly like launch into something different, until the poem totally loses its meaning. Dx So I just try silly. ^^

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  7. Another great poem! I can relate to this one too. Actually, I think everybody can relate to this poem. We all feel lonely sometimes and when we do, we often wish for someone we love to be there and help us through it. Also, I sometimes find that when I feel lonely, I start to think about people I can't see or talk to anymore and miss them more than ever. I'll just wish that person could be with me at that moment.

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  8. hey.....cute one...!!
    guess wht?!!....now most probably i shall b posting regularly!!

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  9. nice poem.. loved it
    keep writing :-)

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  10. U seem to depend too much on someone for your happiness.

    Hope ur free once again, sooner than later


    Cheers
    CRD

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  11. very touching and deep.:)
    well done.:)

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  12. why thanks! Hey I know I haven't been writing on that "It's a Boy Girl Story" for a while but there's one story that I've been writing currently. It's called "My Sister's Ex". If you have time come check it out! Here's the link: my-sisters-ex.blogspot.com

    Thanks!

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Your words mean a lot :)