Tuesday, March 27, 2012

She Drives Me Crazy All The Time :)

Part 1 =)


Present


"Oh My God! It's so good to see you here!" She exclaimed, as she got up to hug me.
"Yea, same here." I sheepishly say, ruffling my hair. 
She grins at me and starts laughing.
"What?" I ask.
"Nothing. You're still a couch potato." She says.


I smile. She hadn't changed at all..

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4 years back

Sonia. 

She drove me mad. Like literally insane! From the first day that she sat besides me in the 11th grade, she did nothing apart from driving me crazy. And all my efforts of running away from her went in vain. There was nothing that I could do, to get her off my back. 
She spoke a lot. No, she blabbered non stop. She could never keep shut. From pinging me on facebook, to calling me up at odd hours to actually waiting outside my house for me, she was everywhere! She was practically staking me. And the more I tried to get away from her, the closer she tried to come to me. 
My friends made fun of her, cause she ate a lot of cheese, didn't care about her weight or her dressing. They found her dumb and she was nowhere near being a girlfriend material. 
I wanted to get away from her, but then, there was something about that girl. 
So, when she invited me for her birthday party, I thought of giving it a try.
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I had no idea about what to gift her. So I landed up with a box of chocolates. I've never really had any girl friends, and the entire female species were like alines to me. I found them weird with their hair straight one day, and all curled up the next day. I mean, seriously, don't they have anything better to do? 
As I approached her house, I could see her sitting outside on the porch, wearing a red dress. 
She looked adorable.
Yes, I did say that.
She looked so innocent, so pretty. Unlike the usual days, her hair was open, and they fell over her dark brown eyes. Her eyes..they spoke the words of sadness. 
"Happy Birthday" I say. I was kind of awkward as it was just the two of us. 
"Well thank you. I thought you would not turn up." She says, taking the box of chocolates.
"Err..But here I am. So where are the others?" I ask, as I sit down besides her.
"You're my only friend" She says as she looks towards me. She says nothing for a while, and then she grins and I can't help laughing when I look at the mess she has made with her lips while eating the chocolates. 
"You want one?" She asks. 
"Thank you" I say, trying to pick a melted bar of the chocolate. 

And so, this is how it all started..
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Next: Part 2 :)
Picture: Google.

24 comments:

  1. Juhi, nice beginning!
    note, when u put a pic, add the source as in the original source - if its a long url, cut it short with a url shortening site like bit.ly, google is definitely not a source for any image, its just a medium.

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    1. Well thank you. I'll surely do that next time :)

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  2. So I see that you have encompassed your writer's block! I loved this post!
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  3. A sweet and nice story! Waiting for more:)

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  4. I miss your writings Philo..I always love reading your pieces..and I can't wait for the next one..puppy love they say and will it lead to a true love on the next chapters hehehe..thanks for sharing ;)

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  5. love the story!

    I recently did a review on a pretty Lulu's dress, hope you will stop by and check it out, Thanks!

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  6. You are really amazing,sweetie! Every single piece you've written is exceptional, always filled with such emotions, I don't know how you do it. You were indeed born to write.
    I love you. :)

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  7. beautiful!..This is lovely beginning of the story...sounds interesting.....waiting for next part...

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  8. Its always so nice to read ur short stories...!! One can always relate wit the characters :):) nice piece :):)

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  9. I liked it. Can't wait for the next one :D
    I love how he just gave up :P

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  10. Nice work philo.. waiting for the next part :)

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  11. I like the name Sonia for some strange reason xD
    and you mention non-stop talkers, and love for food .. haha, sounds like meeeee. The part about curly and poker straight her LOL I have a friend who keeps nagging me about that weird habit. xD
    Waiting eagerly for the next part :)

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  12. Oh my! So this is going to be a story from a guy's point of view. You have left me intrigued. I will definitely have to come back for more. You keep getting better and better with these stories.

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  13. smiles...girls def feel like aliens at times...esp at a young age as we are figuring everything out...i am intrigued by your story...will catch the rest when i return

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  14. Amazing .. what a TAKE-1 this is .. superb..
    keep rolling :) (:

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  15. I spot a typo - you mean 'alien', right?
    Nice read. Back to writing love stories, are we? :D

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  16. Waiting...waiting..waiting.......next part when????:-D

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  17. This is what this space missed for what - like 1 or 2 months now? Looks like you are back with a bang! Loved the story spin! Will wait for part 2

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  18. sweet like chocolate :)
    - takes me bak to my teens.. ages/decades ago :)
    reding the continuation now..

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