Friday, January 8, 2010

Hush..

Silent cries,
Hidden tears.
My hurt heart
You fail to see.

I lie unnoticed,
You think I'm fine.
My heart calls out,
But you fail to feel.

Lonely nights,
No response from your side.
Drenched with fear,
I still lie waiting for you.

Time ticks away,
I don't find you near.
I realize it's gonna be another ordinary night
When I cover myself,
And hug my knees.

Letting those tears flow,
I feel my broken heart still break.
How I wish you could hear me for once...
But I know, you're far away
Gone!
And I'm the only one to feel my pain
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9 comments:

  1. Why do u write the stuff again and again.... i cant just call all the post Fabulous... or should i find synonyms for this word... Bingo u did it again!! :)

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  2. woooow! awesome gal!
    Superb! :)
    Keep blogging :)

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  3. Good to see the poem. Why don't you tag your blog posts, it will be easier for me to read them...

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  4. I've got just one word.

    AMAZING ^_^

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  5. Nice Poem indeed. DEEP is one word to describe it.

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  6. Hi.. Awesome one..

    but yaa, could understand your feelings..U have xpressed well..Keep writing..:)

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  7. as much as i loved this one...n as much as i know i'll regret saying this...the male-bashing thing u came up with was far more fun...bring out your 'once-in-a-blue-moon' fun side more often! :D

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  8. how can u write all ths..
    frm where did u get these thoughts...

    do let me know..

    beautiful...

    post

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  9. uff i commented twice..dunno why my comments didnt get posted.
    Neway, lovely work as usual darling. Ur gona be a famous poetess one day and then I'd be able to brag about how I used to read your poems even before u got famous! :P

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Your words mean a lot :)