Broken Apart

You left,
Leaving your imprint on my soul.
You left,
Leaving those memories in my heart.
You left,
Leaving me alone.
You left,
After pretending to care for so long.
You left,
Even though you knew I cared.
You left,
Breaking my trust.
You left,
Tearing me apart.
You left,
Leaving me on a condition
Never to love again...

Comments

  1. AnonymousJanuary 29, 2010 at 2:24 AM

    Broken apart :) spelling

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  2. supriyaJanuary 29, 2010 at 2:37 AM

    beautiful..but use the reality of the first few lines of the poem...to come over the last 2 lines...!!!
    one should learn to move on..

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  3. Rohit DassaniJanuary 29, 2010 at 2:43 AM

    Wow...that was super super stuff madam....i guess its the exam effect....cool....u should have exams more often!! lol !!

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  4. Anil SawanJanuary 29, 2010 at 3:47 AM

    memories cud inspire if treated properly. may the beauty of the poem reflect in ur life and the sadness in the theme give u strength to over power the shadow in life. god bless u swthrt.

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  5. JackJanuary 29, 2010 at 4:58 AM

    Juhi,

    Sadness on break up nicely expressed. How about some happy one now?

    Take care

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  6. ShritiJanuary 29, 2010 at 5:07 AM

    woOoOoOow!
    awesome gal! :)

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  7. sjmachJanuary 29, 2010 at 5:13 AM

    Never to love again?

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  8. ShivaJanuary 29, 2010 at 7:02 AM

    nice... reads like rapped up break up

    hope iss baar u will comment on http://www.poeticpiss.wordpress.com

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  9. Blunt EdgesJanuary 29, 2010 at 9:47 AM

    one of the best i have read here! :D

    the typo on the title is evident...btw why didn't u name the post 'You Left'? ;)

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  10. YJanuary 29, 2010 at 1:59 PM

    Nice poem...never to love again...u write really well :)

    Awesome read :)

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  11. Sakhi.January 29, 2010 at 10:14 PM

    one of ur bests!!...
    short n sweet...yet sad;)

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  12. TaraJanuary 30, 2010 at 9:44 AM

    I love this poem! I can totally relate to it too because I've actually been in that situation with a couple of people before (they said they would never leave me but they did). Great job. I'm sorry I haven't been around much once again. I've missed you though and I've missed reading your poems.

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  13. UnknownFebruary 1, 2010 at 9:57 AM

    great

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  14. deepsFebruary 2, 2010 at 8:25 PM

    i guess.. thats not for a very long time... but just a break.. a gap, that will soon be filled in...
    but now you got some other things to worry about i guess

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  15. Shruti NarayananFebruary 5, 2010 at 6:59 AM

    ah! my present state of mind!!

    amazing writeup!!

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  16. Karan AgrawalFebruary 7, 2010 at 3:59 AM

    You left!!! again nice poetry...

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  17. Mixed..FeelingsMarch 14, 2010 at 12:07 AM

    Specific words yet true emotions
    I like ur style of writing. Its strong and Flexible
    amazing poem

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  18. SatyUMarch 19, 2010 at 2:50 AM

    Its awesome :)
    True emotions..Loved it :)

    takecare

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