I'm Back!!!! :D :P

Hi Guys !
I'm back!
Ya, I still have two more exams to go, but I guess I couldn't stop myself from posting! :)
Well...as per my papers. They were okay. Not really great! Social Studies was bad and English was the best! The subject I dread is still left though :D S-C-I-E-N-C-E !!!!!!!!!! :( :(
I lost a few followers..Umm...
Anyways, here's something I've written!

I look into the mirror,
I feel like breaking the face of the person I see.
I stare hard, my eyes glaring...
Trying to figure out what was wrong in me.

My vision gets blur
I close my fists tight.
I wanna calm down...
Wanna say it's fine.

I wanna tear the picture of you
I hold.
I wanna rub off that smile off your face.
But whenever I try to do so,
My knees go weak
And before I know,
I'm on the ground...
Saying, "Please be mine, please!"

Take Care Guys!
*HugZz*

Comments

  1. AnonymousApril 9, 2009 at 4:11 AM

    Huh, does that mean I am that person? lol, hope someone loves me this much.

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  2. Sakhi.April 9, 2009 at 4:28 AM

    heya....dun wry....u still hav a lot of followers:)
    and loved ur poet...its gr8...i wonder how such rockind thots cum into ur mind during xams!!

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  3. NotionApril 9, 2009 at 5:16 AM

    it's hard to hurt the ones you love and you spelled fist (just so the readers can understand) wrong but great poem as usual

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  4. OpaqueApril 9, 2009 at 5:43 AM

    Strong!!! I have always sensed a more song-like approach in your... poems. Makes it a tad more interesting to me, frankly.

    And, yea, as Notion spotted, it is "fist" not fits. Must be a typo.

    Umm, yet again, there is an award waiting at my spot for you. Kindly visit while free.

    I have added myself to the follower's list. Cheers!!!

    All the best for your exams!!!

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  5. srikanthApril 9, 2009 at 9:21 AM

    rocking though u have exams?? ooooff!!

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  6. SavyApril 9, 2009 at 12:49 PM

    Nice poem. I love the emotion behind it it's very layered. I have no idea if that made any sense, but it was a compliment ;P I haven't been making a lot of sense lately lol

    Good luck with your paper and your exams!

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  7. SavyApril 9, 2009 at 12:51 PM

    I love your blog template, btw. It rocks!

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  8. VictoriaApril 9, 2009 at 3:39 PM

    hah, i usually get high 80s or 90s. and its good to have you back! very good poem, i loved it! :)

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  9. AdishaApril 9, 2009 at 8:31 PM

    Such desperation ... so sad !!! :(

    Wish i didn't feel like tearing off people's heads off and on :d

    Cheers,
    adisha

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  10. PallavApril 9, 2009 at 9:30 PM

    oye... need not to be sad n feel bad...
    i thr for u...
    as a follower of ur blog toooo....

    hehehe...jst kidding..
    hey Exams r bad na... i knw bcz mine too r going ...only one left + viva....
    so abt ur post..as beautiful as u r....
    very nicely pen down....

    tc..
    cheers :)
    Pallav

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  11. AnonymousApril 10, 2009 at 2:26 AM

    good luck for the xams !! nice lines here but y so painful ??

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  12. Arnab MajumdarApril 12, 2009 at 12:50 AM

    Hey, good luck with your exams firstly. And, another brilliant poem there as always :) cheers, and welcome back... albeit for a little while...

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  13. MacApril 12, 2009 at 11:22 AM

    I wouldn't worry about losing followers. Its just part of the blogging experince!

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