I'll Never Come Back

I don't know what you're trying to prove.
I don't care where you got this new look from.
All I know
Is that after seeing the real you...
I'm never gonna come back to you.
You lied dude,
You pretended.
You proved that you're nothing but a jerk.
Now, even though my heart wants to be with you...
My thoughts won't ever let me come back to you!

Comments

  1. AnonymousJanuary 19, 2009 at 2:23 AM

    superb yaar
    U r good at poems. But first tell me, where r u going? huh...;)

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  2. Sakhi.January 19, 2009 at 2:35 AM

    omg!!tht's nah fair.....where will u run away??
    lolz!!nice one!!

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  3. VictoriaJanuary 19, 2009 at 9:54 AM

    thanks! some of your poems are like youve read my thoughts and written them down :) like 'dream', and the one that says 'I smile myself to sleep, Cause I'm thinking of someone.' and 'you'. they all reminded me of him :)

    and that was a great poem too! :)

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  4. EmmaJanuary 19, 2009 at 10:03 AM

    I came to your blog to say thanks for the comment, but I had to say something about that poem.

    That is a really good one. That's exactly how I feel right now about a guy in my life.

    Love your blog!

    Emj

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  5. DibsyJanuary 19, 2009 at 11:58 AM

    where did you get this idea lol??

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  6. Katie-Banana_PeelJanuary 19, 2009 at 11:59 AM

    This is great!

    Thanks.. for the comment!

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  7. Nicole LinetteJanuary 19, 2009 at 3:44 PM

    That's a good poem, and definitely an experience I've felt before and hated.

    peace&love
    nicole.

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  8. JillianJanuary 19, 2009 at 4:15 PM

    I'm so sorry.
    This is such a sad poem.
    Been there, done that.
    What is this jazz about you running away?
    Peace,
    Jillian

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 21, 2009 at 1:39 PM

    Wow, its really good.
    The kinda thing that you think and feel, but cant put into words (you did put it in words and its fab ;) )
    Have a nice day :)

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  10. NotionJanuary 23, 2009 at 8:31 AM

    so did something bad happen

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  11. SavyJanuary 23, 2009 at 2:24 PM

    Heck ya! I love that.

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