Fed Up! I Mean It

Hi Guys!
Trust me, today I'm totally fed up. And I mean it. When I say totally, it's like really! So, anyways here's a poem I wrote last night. Suggest me a title for it! :)

The stars shine brightly,
While I sit and cry.
The cold wind pinches me piercingly
Which sends a chill down my spine.
I hug my knees And sit on the stairs,
I look up to the black sky
And try to figure out my life.
An owl hoots on the tree,
The breeze blows And dries my tears.
I feel cold I see the moons smiling face.
And that is when I realize...
That the night is my only companion!

Comments

  1. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2009 at 2:01 AM

    Oh, just the poem with theme of life I believe in the same way of life. If someone leaves you, loneliness can sometimes be your best friend,

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2009 at 2:49 AM

    visit this
    http://vickydailylife.blogspot.com/2009/01/what-do-boys-and-girls-loom-for.html

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2009 at 6:08 AM

    Hey Juhi! I have nominated to "I love you blog". go to my blog and read for yourself.

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  4. Katie-Banana_PeelJanuary 30, 2009 at 1:04 PM

    I tagged you~ Go to my blog for more info
    Great peom by the way!
    Jaci

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  5. VictoriaJanuary 30, 2009 at 3:44 PM

    thanks :) and check out my blog!! :)

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  6. TaraJanuary 30, 2009 at 10:38 PM

    Another beautiful poem! You're a very talented writer. I think a good title for this poem might be "A Friend In The Night". I'm sorry to hear you're fed up. I hope you feel better soon.

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  7. AnonymousJanuary 31, 2009 at 1:05 AM

    its cool, i like it.
    umm, not sure for a title :S

    :):)

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  8. VictoriaJanuary 31, 2009 at 9:51 AM

    thanks! and for the title: i agree with tara, i think it should be "A Friend in the Night" :)

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 31, 2009 at 7:34 PM

    hey it's me vLo. the reason why i'm using a diferent account is becuz.. being the idiot i am. i lost my old email's password which is why I'm using a different account. and i'm following you using this account. so anyhow... great poem again and ciao!

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  10. Jayesh PandyaJanuary 31, 2009 at 8:49 PM

    How do we see the moon? Moon is Its all about "REFLECTIONS" dear Juhi! Lovely poem, but how about writing about the Sun this time? Sun is all about light ... No Reflections! Love, Papa.

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  11. Sakhi.February 1, 2009 at 4:36 AM

    nice one........but r u so lonely??
    no wries!!even me!!

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  12. AnonymousFebruary 4, 2009 at 2:41 AM

    i felt so close to myself reading this ... nice !!

    title : "My only companion"

    :) blogrolling u .. do visit my other blog "my world in words" too

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  13. Larger than LifeAugust 7, 2009 at 9:22 AM

    hi juhi ! lovely blog ! i like the way you are so be the same funky kind of person cuz life comes once and live it at its fullest ! love ya !

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