Foolish Us-Evil World
Source: shyaanspoems.blogspot.com |
People are selfish, and we are foolish.
When we realize this, too late it is.
We are already used,
And the person- gone.
The world is unfair, and we are like its puppets.
Before we realize this, the evil gets to us.
Dead we feel.
Lost we become.
Many try to put us down, and yes they do succeed.
Not because they have a mastermind,
But
Because of our loser hearts.
Cry we can, give up like we always do.
But why?
Try to come up,
What is there to lose?
Strong we are,
We just need to believe.
Puppets we are
But you can always cut the strings!
Dance to your own tunes,
Faith- Have in you.
Afraid- you mustn’t be.
And watch how you come up, if you have the right will.
People are selfish, and we are the biggest fools,
The world is unfair, and we are its puppets..
But why dance to all of it?
Make your own beats,
Strike the right chords
And make a life of your own.
After all music is filled with variety,
And you can become one of the finest piece!
Philo,
ReplyDeleteFaith and confidence in self are the key words for being strong to face what life throws at us. Well told.
Take care
Its been a while since I read your work! Brilliant. The emotions!
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ReplyDeleteThis is amazing!!!!!!!!!!
I loved it :) I was going to be "the world is unfair but there are some fair things" but nah you turned it all around :)
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ReplyDeletelovely!!! we da foolish ones :/..gr8 wrk but sweets :)
ReplyDeleteYeah, we are foolish indeed. But then, all great innovators were foolish enough to believe in their ideas... Sometimes, its good to be foolish :)
ReplyDeleteDestination Infinity
this is so inspiring :) Indeed, the world would always try to control us but at the end of the day,the choice still lies within us. :)
ReplyDeletewow, this is so well put, I can sense the grand emotion written into it. A strong message that I completely agree with! excellent!
ReplyDeletei love this..a really strong poetic piece...and i love the wisdom in the end as well...def find your own beat...and make it work...
ReplyDeleteNice one, Juhi:) Sure you must dance to your own tune!
ReplyDeleteyaar how on earth do you kids write such beautiful poetry...m really amazed !
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem Juhi...<3 Loved the way it started and ended...
ReplyDeletebeautifully crafted juhi! :)
ReplyDeleteloved the beats n the chords you struck..
as u say dear, we'll never give up! :)
I never read such stuff in my life.
ReplyDeleteamazing you are :)
Very true! People misuse our love and being kind heart. Self boosting post.
ReplyDeletevery nicely written...thoughtful too
ReplyDeletereally great poem! the 2nd stanza is my favorite!
ReplyDeleteJuliet
That last two stanzas are particularly powerful ~ Enjoyed the share ~
ReplyDeleteDance to your own tunes <3
ReplyDeleteAwesome! So refreshing and carries a hope of a new life. Very well written :) Do visit my blog. Would love to have expert of yours.
ReplyDelete..And watch how you come up, if you have the right will.
ReplyDeleteGives me a great positive feeling! Thanks!
Keep writing :)
some good pics and words to blossom the beauty of harsh world..
ReplyDeleteWeakest LInk
Nice!
ReplyDeleteBeliev in yourself and you will do good. Excellent motto and such a motivating poem.
ReplyDeletebeautiful philo....
ReplyDeletesoft and inspiring poem.
bless u !
anu
beautiful:)
ReplyDeletewow this is so beautiful and touching Philo..reality hurts but it is so true..it happens..we are all molded into whom we are destined to be even though how hurting it maybe..so inspiring ;)
ReplyDeletebeautiful :) yes sometimes it is too late when we realized we are being used or cheated upon... i agree with you 100 percent :)
ReplyDeleteits true pain of life..
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