Tuesday, May 29, 2012

Knickers and Love: Part 1

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“Open up!” She screams.
“What do you want?” I scream back.
“Open up now else watch how I get you screwed.” 
I sigh and get up. 
Some people just don’t change..

Sania stands in front of me. She looks beautiful in the sari mum purchased for her. She looks grown up. It’s weird. 
She barges into my room. “Ah, look at you. You look like a tramp. Do something with your hair for heaven’s sake.” She says, picking at the strands of my hair. 
“Let go of me. What do you want?” I push her away and stare at her angrily. 
“In case you remember, Rahul’s coming over today. You better behave.” 
“Fuck off Sania. You’re the ill mannered bitch.” I scream.

“Girls! What’s going on?” My mother walks in. 
“Nothing” The two of us say, together. 

“So, no telling Rahul that I cheated on him while he was away.” 
“What else?” I ask. I knew this was coming up. 
“Nor are you telling him that I peed in front of the boys that night just to show them that men don’t rule the roads.” 
“And don’t even mention about me removing my knickers and dancing on the table!” 
I stare at her. 
She, my sister, was unbelievable! 
“Do you get it?”
“Yes, now get out.” I say.
“And yea, please wear something good. Don’t embarrass me today at least.”

I flop on to my bed as Sania leaves. I hoped that she fell on her head cause of those high heels that she was wearing.

But no, Sania didn’t fall, and no, Rahul didn’t relaise that there was a devil inside her.
She did her sweet routine, batting her eyelashes at him every now and then, and laughing at every lame joke he cracked. 
My devil sister managed to work her charm, and soon the sweets were distributed.
I was happy. Finally she would be out of the house, and I would not have to live with her. No more torture, no more of having her around.

(to be continued)


  1. Ohho! As usual, I'm waiting for more. ;)

    And hey, the title! :D

  2. Philo,

    You have become expert at teasing one to heights of curiosity. Please do not delay the next part.

    Take care

  3. nice...you have done a great job setting this up in the opening and giving us a good back ground...interested in seeing where you take this...

  4. supa dupa exciting :) waiting fr da next :)u rock !

  5. Two sisters fighting, lovely narration dear...:)

  6. Very nice first chapter ~ Should be interesting where you will take this ~

  7. aha so where would this sibling rivalry leads..visiting you ;)

  8. Juhi, you have a unique way of putting across a story and making the wait for next one worth it:)

  9. <3 sweet friend. Especially the last sentence in the beginning!

  10. oh my goodness- I definitely want to read chapter two on this one- you've left us dangling here- please finish it!

  11. Dear me, such a love-hate relationship! I wonder if it is some form of catharsis.

  12. Interesting title :) Nice write up as always Phillo.. Waiting for more:)

  13. Interesting.. and I'm waiting for the continuation ;)
    Thanks for visiting me.. Following you now! :))


  14. Gosh what a sister! Great first chapter, this has got the balls rolling, waiting for more!!

  15. Haha...Fighting sisters...Lovely first part....

  16. Perfectly starting to your new story with the way sisters support each other, like keeping ones secrets , teases..Hope The next part too brings the same charm.

  17. Whattay bitch :P
    Evil sister >_<
    Waiting for the next one!! :D

  18. you are mastering the art of writing... simple and delightful :-)
    love it

  19. Let wait and see what happens... Nice narrative! lol

  20. Interesting! I really enjoyed your writing!:) Keep sharing more! Waiting for the next chapter!:) God bless!

  21. u write so interestingly,, keep it up.:)


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