Killing Me Softly


You're killing me softly
Your words are no longer sweet,

In your eyes I see a dark path..
Which leads me to nowhere.

Your touch is now cold,
No comfort I find...
Everything you say,
I find I lie.

Suffocated I feel,
I want to get away.

The taste of your lips,
I want to wash away.

You're killing me softly,
I can feel our bond breaking...
An empty love I feel.

But..

I let your taste linger in me,
Hoping to find your warmth someday.

I give in to you,
I lose myself in you...
While,
You love kills me softly

And I let it hurt
With closed eyes..
Scared to open them,
Afraid to face!

Comments

  1. UnknownAugust 24, 2011 at 9:00 AM

    Nice Read!

    Love, Risha :)

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  2. Blasphemous AestheteAugust 24, 2011 at 9:09 AM

    Beautiful.

    Killing softly and yet I'd want to smother softly myself than open my eyes.

    Amazing.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  3. äмän ♥August 24, 2011 at 9:27 AM

    Lovely <3
    and thanks for the comment :)
    following you :)hope you follow me back ;)
    http://my-littlee-secrets.blogspot.com/

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  4. AngeliqueAugust 25, 2011 at 4:34 AM

    Awesome song! :D

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  5. Curl JungAugust 25, 2011 at 8:48 AM

    "Everything you say,
    I find I lie."

    Wow. Awesome-ically CANDID.
    Your touch is now cold,
    No comfort I find...
    Everything you say,
    I find I lie.

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  6. Jyoti MishraAugust 25, 2011 at 10:15 AM

    that was dark...
    Killing softly this exact opposites together looks fab..
    Nice job !!

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  7. shash.destroyer@gmail.comAugust 25, 2011 at 10:20 AM

    nice :)

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  8. RachitAugust 25, 2011 at 10:50 AM

    and the distance apart is killing me softly.. but then the love rebounds the path we meet.

    Weakest LINK

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  9. PhilO♥August 26, 2011 at 2:42 AM

    @ Ayu: Twilight? Is that all that came to your mind :P

    @ Risha: Thanks :)

    @ Blasphemous: Glad you liked it!

    @ Aman: Thanks :) Will surely follow you back!

    @ Tay Tay, Hamza, Jyoti, Shashank and Rachit: Thank You. Do come by again :)

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  10. *dazzlingstar*August 26, 2011 at 9:13 AM

    deep n dark...nicely written!!

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  11. *dazzlingstar*August 26, 2011 at 9:14 AM

    deep n dark...nicely written!!

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  12. aakashAugust 30, 2011 at 12:10 PM

    ahaa.. this is something i love feeding on.. quite a treat!

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