Wednesday, August 24, 2011

Killing Me Softly

You're killing me softly
Your words are no longer sweet,

In your eyes I see a dark path..
Which leads me to nowhere.

Your touch is now cold,
No comfort I find...
Everything you say,
I find I lie.

Suffocated I feel,
I want to get away.

The taste of your lips,
I want to wash away.

You're killing me softly,
I can feel our bond breaking...
An empty love I feel.


I let your taste linger in me,
Hoping to find your warmth someday.

I give in to you,
I lose myself in you...
You love kills me softly

And I let it hurt
With closed eyes..
Scared to open them,
Afraid to face!


  1. it reminds me of twilight's love story :D

  2. Beautiful.

    Killing softly and yet I'd want to smother softly myself than open my eyes.


    Blasphemous Aesthete

  3. Lovely <3
    and thanks for the comment :)
    following you :)hope you follow me back ;)

  4. "Everything you say,
    I find I lie."

    Wow. Awesome-ically CANDID.
    Your touch is now cold,
    No comfort I find...
    Everything you say,
    I find I lie.

  5. that was dark...
    Killing softly this exact opposites together looks fab..
    Nice job !!

  6. and the distance apart is killing me softly.. but then the love rebounds the path we meet.

    Weakest LINK

  7. @ Ayu: Twilight? Is that all that came to your mind :P

    @ Risha: Thanks :)

    @ Blasphemous: Glad you liked it!

    @ Aman: Thanks :) Will surely follow you back!

    @ Tay Tay, Hamza, Jyoti, Shashank and Rachit: Thank You. Do come by again :)

  8. RE: glad you like making painting as well :)

  9. ahaa.. this is something i love feeding on.. quite a treat!


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