A Question Paper With Just No Answers

Have you ever tried to see what is behind this smile of mine?
Ever noticed those tears of mine that I can't shed in front of you?
Have you ever tried to feel my heart?
Ever felt the pain I carry inside me when you turn your face away?
Have you ever noticed how my voice falls down, when you say you're busy?
Ever realized what I feel when you're not there by my side, when I'm all lonely?
Have you ever seen my face when you talk about the other girls?
Ever tried to know what I feel when you keep your cell switched off?
Have you ever really tried to understand me?
Ever allowed me to know you better?
Are you ever gonna have time to clear these thoughts from my mind, from my heart?
Cause I'm sick of crying, tired of waiting.
And whenever I try to tell you what's going on...
You turn your face away,
While my heart bleeds in pain.
But you don't know that, do you?
And maybe it's gonna be very late
By the time you know what you're doing!

Comments

  1. OpaqueJune 16, 2009 at 3:09 AM

    A test of patience, isn't it? Nicely done! Keep writing!!!

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  2. AnonymousJune 16, 2009 at 3:16 AM

    See, I am back to my best friend's blog. okay na?

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  3. JackJune 16, 2009 at 7:05 AM

    Juhi,

    Unfulfilled desires while in love beautifully brought out. Well written.

    Take care

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  4. AdishaJune 16, 2009 at 1:43 PM

    That is soooooooooooooo cute !!!

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  5. Arnab MajumdarJune 16, 2009 at 11:23 PM

    Beautiful, and honest... the two main attributes I look for in anything I read.

    Needless to say, I loved it...

    Cheers...

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  6. PallavJune 17, 2009 at 1:11 AM

    its a nother beau peice from u..
    with simplicity
    i liked it

    Pallav

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  7. TaraJune 17, 2009 at 3:27 PM

    Very beautiful. I can actually relate to this one quite a bit. Good job! :)

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  8. Shantharam Shenoy KJune 17, 2009 at 11:03 PM

    ah!! the pain of love...so sweetly put forward... it hurts badly very badly when the person you love thinks you are nothing but a figment of imagination!!!

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  9. VictoriaJune 18, 2009 at 4:36 PM

    ahh that is so good! very well written! hope you make anoter post soon! :)

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  10. SavyJune 23, 2009 at 5:01 PM

    I like it, it's blunt, strong and as awesome as always ;)

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  11. LydiaJune 26, 2009 at 3:27 AM

    this is great as per usual!!

    I'm baaacccck. Now 16 and with pink hair. Check my blog if you can!

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