Tuesday, April 24, 2012

Caressed (Part 1)

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My heart skips a beat when you come close to me, and when you put your arms around me, I can’t breathe. I just want to stay that way, not wanting to let go off you. 
But you leave… You let go off my hands, and turn away from me. You leave me scared. My mind goes blank. My heart-empty. 

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‘Kate wake up! George is back’ my sister screams into my ears and tugs at me to get up from the bed. For once I don’t mind cause it was George I was going to see. 
‘That boy is some sight, don’t you think so?’ I say, peeping from my window. 
What a way to start my morning! What a beautiful way.
‘Oh, you’ll get a better view of him tonight. Father has already invited him over for the bonfire’ 
‘I see.’ I smile and draw the curtains.

‘Come on Kate. You can’t run away from me all the time.” George pants as he finally catches up with me. 
‘Someone as fit as you should not be huffing so easily. Where is your stamina gone now, huh?” I turn towards him and start walking backwards, throwing stones at him.
‘You know you can’t resist me. Why don’t you just give up, girl?’ He starts moving towards me once again.
“Wh..” I trip before I could complete my sentence and before long George was bent over me, his strong arms held me firmly, and his lips almost touched mine. 
“Try this with some other girl Sir.” I snap, and push him off me. “Tomorrow, I’ll be gone Kate. You might not get me again.” He calls after me, as I run away once again.

35 comments:

  1. Wait the next one:)Well written, story of innocent love, Juhi!

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  2. This is beautiful and I can't wait to read more!!
    Upload soon,kay? :D
    x

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  3. Eagerly waiting for the next part :)

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  4. I wonder why she was so hesitant with him whens he clearly seems to like him.

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  5. nice...this one seems playful...def look forward to seeing where you go with this...

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  6. I didn't get what's left behind to write more? =P

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  7. I JST WAs reading ur old posts of round 2009 etc..dey r like out of da world..i wonder hw can sm1 write so awsm ;) love ur blog completely!

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  8. I can't wait to know what'll happen next. Hurry! Hurry!

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  9. Philo,

    Waiting to know the mystery.

    Take care

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  10. You know I love reading love or teenage love. It's very refreshing...

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  11. I just can't wait for the next one! Bring it out soon :)

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  12. An interesting meeting....why is she running away ~

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  13. Yes, love it..:) For sure the next one will be more exciting...:) love it!:) Hug you more !:)

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  14. so u are running from him.....
    hmmmmm....interesting!!!!
    hope he's following..........
    :-)
    take care.
    anu

    ps-thanks for appreciating my absolute hindi posts:-)

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  15. and i guess thats a dream run with some strings attached :P

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  16. Good story.....at the ending it's mysterious why she'z avoiding him...waiting for next part :D

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  17. u know very well how to start :)
    n how to end :D
    waiting 4 the next one !!

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  18. Donno why but this opening part reminded me of 'dirty dancing', the patrick swayze movie :)

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  19. Sweet story. Love the way you write.

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  20. Nice write up again Philo! I can sense the teenage touch of a breezy love between kate and George! Will wait for the part 2...

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  21. Very beautiful.. Ye dil Maange more:)

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  22. amazing really :) loved it!!

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  23. weeeee..waiting for the next one Philp..visiting you ;)

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  24. swinging through to see if i missed a part..hope you have a great weekend!

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  25. Hello! My first visit, will visit you again. Seriously, I thoroughly enjoyed your posts( really interesting blog). Would be great if you could visit also mine...Thanks for sharing! Keep up the fantastic work!

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  26. ah when i thought things were getting interesting... now waiting for tomorrow...what will happen to george...can kate see him again or not... see all this in the next episode..same time, same place...stay tuned :)

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  27. why doesnt she kiss him!!!???? jelousy or something like that?!! Beautiful text, waiting for the next part!!! ;)

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  28. When is the next part coming?????

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