Caressed (Part 1)

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My heart skips a beat when you come close to me, and when you put your arms around me, I can’t breathe. I just want to stay that way, not wanting to let go off you. 
But you leave… You let go off my hands, and turn away from me. You leave me scared. My mind goes blank. My heart-empty. 

*****

‘Kate wake up! George is back’ my sister screams into my ears and tugs at me to get up from the bed. For once I don’t mind cause it was George I was going to see. 
‘That boy is some sight, don’t you think so?’ I say, peeping from my window. 
What a way to start my morning! What a beautiful way.
‘Oh, you’ll get a better view of him tonight. Father has already invited him over for the bonfire’ 
‘I see.’ I smile and draw the curtains.
…

‘Come on Kate. You can’t run away from me all the time.” George pants as he finally catches up with me. 
‘Someone as fit as you should not be huffing so easily. Where is your stamina gone now, huh?” I turn towards him and start walking backwards, throwing stones at him.
‘You know you can’t resist me. Why don’t you just give up, girl?’ He starts moving towards me once again.
“Wh..” I trip before I could complete my sentence and before long George was bent over me, his strong arms held me firmly, and his lips almost touched mine. 
“Try this with some other girl Sir.” I snap, and push him off me. “Tomorrow, I’ll be gone Kate. You might not get me again.” He calls after me, as I run away once again.
…

Comments

  1. Rahul BhatiaApril 24, 2012 at 2:50 AM

    Wait the next one:)Well written, story of innocent love, Juhi!

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  2. Nirati April 24, 2012 at 2:55 AM

    This is beautiful and I can't wait to read more!!
    Upload soon,kay? :D
    x

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  3. XainApril 24, 2012 at 3:05 AM

    Eagerly waiting for the next part :)

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  4. MarkApril 24, 2012 at 3:20 AM

    I wonder why she was so hesitant with him whens he clearly seems to like him.

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  5. Brian MillerApril 24, 2012 at 3:37 AM

    nice...this one seems playful...def look forward to seeing where you go with this...

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  6. ArundhatiApril 24, 2012 at 4:00 AM

    Ah, wonderful!!

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  7. Z.April 24, 2012 at 4:41 AM

    I didn't get what's left behind to write more? =P

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  8. Farhan JalilApril 24, 2012 at 4:53 AM

    nicely written!

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  9. Palak DuaApril 24, 2012 at 6:50 AM

    I JST WAs reading ur old posts of round 2009 etc..dey r like out of da world..i wonder hw can sm1 write so awsm ;) love ur blog completely!

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  10. ParmitaApril 24, 2012 at 7:08 AM

    I can't wait to know what'll happen next. Hurry! Hurry!

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  11. JackApril 24, 2012 at 9:16 AM

    Philo,

    Waiting to know the mystery.

    Take care

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  12. Saru SinghalApril 24, 2012 at 9:50 AM

    You know I love reading love or teenage love. It's very refreshing...

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  13. CD!!!April 24, 2012 at 9:53 AM

    I just can't wait for the next one! Bring it out soon :)

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  14. Selvaggia CapizziApril 24, 2012 at 10:22 AM

    Uh can't wait for the nex chapter!!
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  15. ScarletApril 24, 2012 at 4:14 PM

    An interesting meeting....why is she running away ~

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  16. SagittarianApril 24, 2012 at 5:31 PM

    Yes, love it..:) For sure the next one will be more exciting...:) love it!:) Hug you more !:)

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  17. ANULATA RAJ NAIRApril 24, 2012 at 6:58 PM

    so u are running from him.....
    hmmmmm....interesting!!!!
    hope he's following..........
    :-)
    take care.
    anu

    ps-thanks for appreciating my absolute hindi posts:-)

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  18. deepsApril 24, 2012 at 7:10 PM

    and i guess thats a dream run with some strings attached :P

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  19. Sri ValliApril 25, 2012 at 3:51 AM

    Good story.....at the ending it's mysterious why she'z avoiding him...waiting for next part :D

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  20. Jyoti MishraApril 25, 2012 at 7:57 AM

    u know very well how to start :)
    n how to end :D
    waiting 4 the next one !!

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  21. shiv"sApril 25, 2012 at 12:35 PM

    Nice 1..,,
    you write well..,,

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  22. phaticharApril 25, 2012 at 7:23 PM

    Donno why but this opening part reminded me of 'dirty dancing', the patrick swayze movie :)

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  23. NicoleApril 25, 2012 at 9:20 PM

    Sweet story. Love the way you write.

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  24. AnuApril 26, 2012 at 8:53 AM

    Nice write up again Philo! I can sense the teenage touch of a breezy love between kate and George! Will wait for the part 2...

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  25. SoniaApril 27, 2012 at 3:10 AM

    Very beautiful.. Ye dil Maange more:)

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  26. Palak DuaApril 27, 2012 at 12:12 PM

    amazing really :) loved it!!

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  27. ✿Sie✿April 28, 2012 at 2:53 AM

    weeeee..waiting for the next one Philp..visiting you ;)

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  28. Brian MillerApril 28, 2012 at 4:23 AM

    swinging through to see if i missed a part..hope you have a great weekend!

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  29. NelsonApril 28, 2012 at 6:00 PM

    Hello! My first visit, will visit you again. Seriously, I thoroughly enjoyed your posts( really interesting blog). Would be great if you could visit also mine...Thanks for sharing! Keep up the fantastic work!

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  30. AnonymousApril 28, 2012 at 10:48 PM

    do morrrrrrrrre! i loved it :-)

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  31. Joshua TjandraApril 29, 2012 at 8:17 PM

    show me the part 2! :)

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  32. Misterio VidaApril 30, 2012 at 2:32 AM

    ah when i thought things were getting interesting... now waiting for tomorrow...what will happen to george...can kate see him again or not... see all this in the next episode..same time, same place...stay tuned :)

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  33. Anne FrankApril 30, 2012 at 11:18 AM

    why doesnt she kiss him!!!???? jelousy or something like that?!! Beautiful text, waiting for the next part!!! ;)

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  34. ashokMay 2, 2012 at 9:39 AM

    too good!

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  35. CD!!!May 3, 2012 at 5:25 AM

    When is the next part coming?????

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