Just because you offer to pay the bills,

It doesn’t mean you’re doing anything great.

Just cause you offer to come pick me up,

Doesn’t mean you’re being a gentleman.


I don’t need your money,

Nor do I want a ride in your new BMW.

You can keep all that you have,

Cause I’ve had enough of you.


You go about yelling at every other guy who talks to me,

You act like you own me.

No

I ain’t your Barbie doll,

And you’re not being cool.


You go and brag about your acts to your friends,

You think that’s an achievement!

Go and try that with your mum,

And watch how you get kicked out of your house.


No, don’t put your arms around me,

No, don’t shower your gifts on me.

Don’t tell me that I’m your sweetheart,

Cause you don’t know the real me.


Don’t tell me what not to do,

Cause I’ve got a life of my own.

You can go pick another girl to ride on

In your new BMW!

.....

With this, I'm signing off for now :)

I'll be back in the end of March. Till then, take care. Hope to see you all when I'm back :)


Love and hugs,

Philo =)


Comments

  1. Confused SoulFebruary 16, 2012 at 10:10 AM

    where you going? gosh ul be missed PhilO :/ ..
    But have fun :)

    This post was fiery and nice :D

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  2. SagittarianFebruary 16, 2012 at 1:58 PM

    Oh, lovely ending even though she doesn't want to ride with his new BMW!LOL It only shows, you're a girl with a pride and can't get with a gift.. Very smart post.. Love it!

    Okay friend, hope you're having a great vacation, will be here waiting.:)

    Keep smiling..:)

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  3. shash.destroyer@gmail.comFebruary 16, 2012 at 2:07 PM

    Will be missing, take care
    Stay Blessed ^_^

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  4. Selvaggia CapizziFebruary 16, 2012 at 3:04 PM

    I quote you word by word!!!

    Don't Call Me Fashion Blogger
    Facebook
    Bloglovin'

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  5. MarkFebruary 16, 2012 at 3:08 PM

    Well you went out on an awesome note at leas,t I loved this, and I'll see you when you get back.

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  6. --February 16, 2012 at 5:39 PM

    That's the way to tell him!! Go, PhilO :D See you after your break ~ take care :-)

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  7. AnjuliFebruary 16, 2012 at 8:39 PM

    This was really a strong and amazing piece!!!!

    Oh we will definitely miss you on your break- will see you in March.

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  8. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 16, 2012 at 9:34 PM

    Very well written, Juhi and wishing you the very best for everything:) You will have better things than BMW:):)

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  9. Vijender :February 16, 2012 at 9:40 PM

    so much anti-men sentiment in it :)
    Great perspective that everyone needs to understand and acknowledge (in right spirit)

    Cheers!!

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  10. ArundhatiFebruary 16, 2012 at 10:08 PM

    You sign off with a BANG and you return with a BANG! Awesome!

    All the very best for your exams and everything rest! :)

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  11. Carnett RoseFebruary 17, 2012 at 2:11 AM

    Oh dear, I almost thought this was in retaliation. Or is it? ^^

    But yeah, it's typical you. :D

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  12. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺February 17, 2012 at 2:18 AM

    Haha!..What a post!....Loved the way you warned him and made everything clear :D

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  13. Confused SoulFebruary 17, 2012 at 4:43 AM

    I'd commented on this one...wonder where it went? :(

    Anyway.. this was a beautiful and fiery piece.. loved it.. will miss you till you're back.. have fun :)

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    1. Brian MillerFebruary 17, 2012 at 4:49 AM

      love the strength in your voice in this....travel light until your return...see you then....

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  14. Dreaming Wanderer. www.tonightidream-iwander.blogspot.comFebruary 17, 2012 at 5:14 AM

    nicely said juhi.. u shud turn this one into a rap!! ;)
    wud hav loved to collaborate wid u on this one :)

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  15. Sujatha SathyaFebruary 17, 2012 at 5:59 AM

    loved this one Juhi :)

    and march is a long long time. take care

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  16. Ifrah YousufFebruary 17, 2012 at 8:23 AM

    LOve it!!!

    Come back soon!!

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  17. anatreekFebruary 17, 2012 at 8:59 AM

    Landed on ur blog through someone else's..loved this post! :)

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  18. sadafFebruary 17, 2012 at 10:41 AM

    why so long break philo :)

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  19. RahulFebruary 17, 2012 at 11:14 PM

    LOved this post!!And best of luck for your exams...:-)

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  20. ParmitaFebruary 18, 2012 at 5:00 AM

    Great! That's the attitude! Awesome poem it indeed is. I am listening to Kelly Clarkson's song "Mr. Know it all" and feel that this would fit well as a rocking song as well.
    Take care! :)

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  21. Ridx February 18, 2012 at 6:59 AM

    exactly what I felt like saying! :D
    I am so gonna miss you!
    Take Care :D

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  22. ShreyaFebruary 18, 2012 at 12:03 PM

    :) Get back soon :)

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  23. Writing BeeFebruary 18, 2012 at 8:51 PM

    Waiting for your return

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  24. CJFebruary 19, 2012 at 5:26 AM

    Awesome :D
    Fiery and strong, confident and with loads of attitude!
    Loved it :)
    After reading some of the other comments, I realized that you're going to be away because of your exams...Hope you do well :)
    All the best!

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  25. Dreaming Wanderer. www.tonightidream-iwander.blogspot.comFebruary 20, 2012 at 6:28 AM

    Ur post brought the Eminem in me out!
    it's a bit kiddish but I tried to rap this post of urs..
    here it goes:


    Chorus:
    I want to fly, without your wings..
    I got my pride,
    My own dreams…

    Just cuz you offer to pay the bills,
    doesn’t mean you’re doing great!
    Just cuz you offer to come pick me up,
    doesn’t make you no gentleman, you’re yet a prick!

    No! I don’t need your money,
    No! I don’t want no ride in your new BM!
    You can keep all that you have,
    I swear I’ve had enough of your shit!

    You go about yelling at every other guy who talks to me,
    You act like you own me,
    Like u fuking’ possess me!!

    No! I ain’t your Barbie doll!
    When you ain’t gonna take my calls..
    No! I ain’t your shiny bling!
    When you treat me like just another show-off thing!!

    You go brag about yourself to your friends,
    You think that’s an achievement!
    No! I ain’t givin you no '10'!

    Go and try that with your mom,
    Watch ur ass get kicked out of your home!
    No! no one can take your non-sense!


    No! don’t put your arms around me,
    No! don’t shower your gifts on me.
    Don’t tell me that I’m your sweetheart,
    Cause you don’t know the real me.

    Don’t tell me what not to do,
    Cause I’ve got a life of my own.
    Just go take your BM, pick-up another chick!
    In the end, even she’ll know ur just a big dick!

    Chorus:
    I want to fly, without your wings..
    I got my pride,
    My own dreams…


    the chorus can be sung in a melody :)

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  26. Stuti DhyaniFebruary 20, 2012 at 6:31 AM

    what a power packed post!!! i just loved the gush of energy here and the way you take the string of your life in your hand. and true, anyone can sit in BMW,,,,but it takes effort in rightly treating you :)

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  27. MithlashFebruary 20, 2012 at 10:42 PM

    Lovely thought, nicely expressed and another gud shot from you...:)

    Will wait for you till March:)

    Take care:)

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  28. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2012 at 12:10 PM

    Good one indeed. Cheers and take care.....

    :)

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  29. JackFebruary 23, 2012 at 1:49 AM

    Philo,

    One can not treat partner as own property. There has to be mutual respect and mutual trust. Well composed.

    Take care

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  30. S.February 23, 2012 at 6:51 PM

    Loved every bit of it ya..Especially the BMW mention ;) That's for rich brats who show up the money and think they can buy love.
    Come back soon. :)

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  31. Seeker of EquanimityFebruary 23, 2012 at 8:18 PM

    that seemed like a good kick out to someone a bit too possessive...
    come back soon

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  32. Misterio VidaFebruary 26, 2012 at 9:36 PM

    oh girl...for the first time i am grateful i dont have a BMW :P and come back soon :)

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  33. Nirati February 27, 2012 at 9:41 PM

    Whoa! This was powerful and I loved the last lines :D
    Be back soon!
    x

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  34. Jyoti MishraMarch 1, 2012 at 10:48 PM

    an awesome post as ever :)
    lovely read

    take care !!

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  35. Ifrah YousufMarch 2, 2012 at 11:57 PM

    I've tagged you in my post. Link is below:
    http://ifrahyousuf.blogspot.com/2012/03/taggers.html#comment-form

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  36. OvaisMarch 4, 2012 at 3:12 AM

    I like it :)

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  37. Anil SawanMarch 9, 2012 at 12:09 AM

    live your life your way and enjoy the perks :)

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