Thursday, February 16, 2012

Just because you offer to pay the bills,

It doesn’t mean you’re doing anything great.

Just cause you offer to come pick me up,

Doesn’t mean you’re being a gentleman.


I don’t need your money,

Nor do I want a ride in your new BMW.

You can keep all that you have,

Cause I’ve had enough of you.


You go about yelling at every other guy who talks to me,

You act like you own me.

No

I ain’t your Barbie doll,

And you’re not being cool.


You go and brag about your acts to your friends,

You think that’s an achievement!

Go and try that with your mum,

And watch how you get kicked out of your house.


No, don’t put your arms around me,

No, don’t shower your gifts on me.

Don’t tell me that I’m your sweetheart,

Cause you don’t know the real me.


Don’t tell me what not to do,

Cause I’ve got a life of my own.

You can go pick another girl to ride on

In your new BMW!

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With this, I'm signing off for now :)

I'll be back in the end of March. Till then, take care. Hope to see you all when I'm back :)


Love and hugs,

Philo =)


38 comments:

  1. where you going? gosh ul be missed PhilO :/ ..
    But have fun :)

    This post was fiery and nice :D

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  2. Oh, lovely ending even though she doesn't want to ride with his new BMW!LOL It only shows, you're a girl with a pride and can't get with a gift.. Very smart post.. Love it!

    Okay friend, hope you're having a great vacation, will be here waiting.:)

    Keep smiling..:)

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  3. Will be missing, take care
    Stay Blessed ^_^

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  4. Well you went out on an awesome note at leas,t I loved this, and I'll see you when you get back.

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  5. That's the way to tell him!! Go, PhilO :D See you after your break ~ take care :-)

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  6. This was really a strong and amazing piece!!!!

    Oh we will definitely miss you on your break- will see you in March.

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  7. Very well written, Juhi and wishing you the very best for everything:) You will have better things than BMW:):)

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  8. so much anti-men sentiment in it :)
    Great perspective that everyone needs to understand and acknowledge (in right spirit)

    Cheers!!

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  9. You sign off with a BANG and you return with a BANG! Awesome!

    All the very best for your exams and everything rest! :)

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  10. Oh dear, I almost thought this was in retaliation. Or is it? ^^

    But yeah, it's typical you. :D

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  11. Haha!..What a post!....Loved the way you warned him and made everything clear :D

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  12. I'd commented on this one...wonder where it went? :(

    Anyway.. this was a beautiful and fiery piece.. loved it.. will miss you till you're back.. have fun :)

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    1. love the strength in your voice in this....travel light until your return...see you then....

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  13. nicely said juhi.. u shud turn this one into a rap!! ;)
    wud hav loved to collaborate wid u on this one :)

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  14. loved this one Juhi :)

    and march is a long long time. take care

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  15. Landed on ur blog through someone else's..loved this post! :)

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  16. LOved this post!!And best of luck for your exams...:-)

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  17. Great! That's the attitude! Awesome poem it indeed is. I am listening to Kelly Clarkson's song "Mr. Know it all" and feel that this would fit well as a rocking song as well.
    Take care! :)

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  18. exactly what I felt like saying! :D
    I am so gonna miss you!
    Take Care :D

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  19. Awesome :D
    Fiery and strong, confident and with loads of attitude!
    Loved it :)
    After reading some of the other comments, I realized that you're going to be away because of your exams...Hope you do well :)
    All the best!

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  20. Ur post brought the Eminem in me out!
    it's a bit kiddish but I tried to rap this post of urs..
    here it goes:


    Chorus:
    I want to fly, without your wings..
    I got my pride,
    My own dreams…

    Just cuz you offer to pay the bills,
    doesn’t mean you’re doing great!
    Just cuz you offer to come pick me up,
    doesn’t make you no gentleman, you’re yet a prick!

    No! I don’t need your money,
    No! I don’t want no ride in your new BM!
    You can keep all that you have,
    I swear I’ve had enough of your shit!

    You go about yelling at every other guy who talks to me,
    You act like you own me,
    Like u fuking’ possess me!!

    No! I ain’t your Barbie doll!
    When you ain’t gonna take my calls..
    No! I ain’t your shiny bling!
    When you treat me like just another show-off thing!!

    You go brag about yourself to your friends,
    You think that’s an achievement!
    No! I ain’t givin you no '10'!

    Go and try that with your mom,
    Watch ur ass get kicked out of your home!
    No! no one can take your non-sense!


    No! don’t put your arms around me,
    No! don’t shower your gifts on me.
    Don’t tell me that I’m your sweetheart,
    Cause you don’t know the real me.

    Don’t tell me what not to do,
    Cause I’ve got a life of my own.
    Just go take your BM, pick-up another chick!
    In the end, even she’ll know ur just a big dick!

    Chorus:
    I want to fly, without your wings..
    I got my pride,
    My own dreams…


    the chorus can be sung in a melody :)

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  21. what a power packed post!!! i just loved the gush of energy here and the way you take the string of your life in your hand. and true, anyone can sit in BMW,,,,but it takes effort in rightly treating you :)

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  22. Lovely thought, nicely expressed and another gud shot from you...:)

    Will wait for you till March:)

    Take care:)

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  23. Good one indeed. Cheers and take care.....

    :)

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  24. Philo,

    One can not treat partner as own property. There has to be mutual respect and mutual trust. Well composed.

    Take care

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  25. Loved every bit of it ya..Especially the BMW mention ;) That's for rich brats who show up the money and think they can buy love.
    Come back soon. :)

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  26. that seemed like a good kick out to someone a bit too possessive...
    come back soon

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  27. oh girl...for the first time i am grateful i dont have a BMW :P and come back soon :)

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  28. Whoa! This was powerful and I loved the last lines :D
    Be back soon!
    x

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  29. an awesome post as ever :)
    lovely read

    take care !!

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  30. I've tagged you in my post. Link is below:
    http://ifrahyousuf.blogspot.com/2012/03/taggers.html#comment-form

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  31. live your life your way and enjoy the perks :)

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Your words mean a lot :)