Friday, July 22, 2011


Her innocent laugh,
Her glittering eyes.
Her light heart..
Flies high!
Nothing to worry about,
Lost in her own world,
She swings...
Hoping she will reach the sky
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A shadow's cast
Over her innocent life...
With a heavy heart
She tries to fly.
Lost in a maze, of guilt and lies,
She swings high
Hoping,
That her cries will be heard.
Hoping,
That she can find the glitter lost in her eyes!

[Picture taken from Google]

7 comments:

  1. Why must you always swing between the extremes? There's a thing called balance and it would do you good to attempt at creating a character who carries both happiness and misery within her. That is the real strength of writing.

    Other than that, it's as good as I would expect from you, but you can and should aim higher. :)

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  2. Lovely poem and i loved the picture. :)

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  3. @Rose: She does that always....

    But she is good writer....

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  4. Perhaps, the world shows its ugly face to innocent beings lending them a heavy heart. The not so innocent ones, well, they make up the world.

    Nice read, I do hope she soars despite of everything that might seem wrong.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  5. i hope she finds that glitter as well...there is a nice contrast in the two stanzas...

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  6. Hope her heavy heart's cleared...and her silent cries are heard

    Nice poem :)

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