Sunday, April 24, 2011

...


And
I wanted to sing,

Stand up there,
Face it all
And
Express what I feel...

I wanted the words to flow,
With closed eyes,
I wanted to feel my soul come alive!

But,
When I went up
I remained quiet...

The words dug into my soul,
Leaving me numb
With nobody around
To hold!

10 comments:

  1. you. look inside once. and you wouldnt need anything else to hold on too :)

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  2. L D,

    If what you wish to say is truth there is no need to get tongue tied or to hold someone. Be bold and say it.

    Take care

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  3. Beautifully written :)

    Happy Blogging

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  4. I like your poem. Well said! :-)

    Thank you for visiting and commenting on my blog today.

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  5. Happens, its just that we need to get this fear out of the head that someone's watching.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  6. hey!

    this poem looks simple prima facie, but is quite deep.... long way to go girl!

    keep writing :)

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  7. its same everywhere, but then don't lose hope, just strive hard.. tell yourself that how can you lose a battle with those words who won't even weigh more than few nano pounds. A lovely blog :)

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Your words mean a lot :)