~You're No Longer Here..

Everything reminds me of you,
And I miss your presence all the time...
Your warmth I can no longer feel,
And
It's as if time has come to a standstill.

I wonder if you're okay without me,
Cause I'm shattered without having you around...
I dream about you all the time,
And
I wish I could run into your arms!

Thinking about the gone days
Brings tears in my eyes...
But
I'm afraid to cry,
Cause you're no longer around to wipe my tears!

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Take Care!
xo

Comments

  1. ShadowJanuary 25, 2011 at 3:31 AM

    dammit, this is good. bitter-sweet!

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  2. Brian MillerJanuary 25, 2011 at 4:01 AM

    nice...have felt that feeling and you captured it well...great to see you today

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  3. Blasphemous AestheteJanuary 25, 2011 at 6:28 AM

    :) Probably he misses you too? I wish he does.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  4. RitikaJanuary 25, 2011 at 6:37 AM

    I m sure he misses you too,

    Because when in love, we miss someone, the other one misses us too. The thing is one shows, and the other doesn't. Don't worry!

    Nice poem btw! Would love to dedicate it to my love!

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  5. Bleah Briann//Lovely January 25, 2011 at 8:32 AM

    Thanks for the sweet comment. :)

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  6. Unruly RebelJanuary 26, 2011 at 12:05 AM

    too deep...emotional stuff...written nicely... :)

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  7. SonshuJanuary 30, 2011 at 1:01 AM

    Omg. I missed reading ya.
    WOW. :) Youve written so well, now i know why youre nominated ;) ahem. oh long since we spoke we've gotta catch up! :) After exams okay? :)

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  8. JackJanuary 30, 2011 at 7:45 AM

    Juhi,

    Read all pending poems. Loved each and every poem. How about some with positive thoughts? I loved one on Goodbye 2010 the most as it showed positive side. You can really inspire people with your poems with positive approach.

    Take care

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  9. Sakhi.February 3, 2011 at 4:12 AM

    wow nice :)
    bitter-sweet !

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  10. Blunt EdgesFebruary 3, 2011 at 7:36 AM

    Sweet :)
    And romance sure is in the air this time of the year ;)

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  11. DeepikaFebruary 4, 2011 at 7:45 AM

    Feeling deja vu.
    Been there. Felt that. Sigh. He might not be missing you.. Maybe he never deserved the pure heart of yours. Let it go. Let it go.

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    You're No Longer Here" is a poetic masterpiece that paints a vivid picture of the pain and longing associated with loss. The writer skillfully weaves words together to create a symphony of emotions that tugs at the heartstrings. A must-read for anyone who has experienced the ache of missing someone dear
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    Thinking about the gone days brings tears in my eyes..." This line, among others, resonated deeply with me. The poet has a remarkable ability to capture complex emotions in a few words, making this piece both captivating and thought-provoking. It's a testament to the universal experience of loss and the longing for what once was
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    Beyond the eloquent expression of grief, I appreciate the personal touch of sharing information about the poetry blog voting. It adds a sense of community and invites readers to engage further with the world of poetry. This blend of personal reflection and a broader connection to the poetry community makes the post not only a heartfelt piece but also a doorway into a shared artistic experience
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