Thursday, September 17, 2009


We held hands

And walked on the wet sand…

His arms around my waist,

Oh! It felt so very nice.

The shine on his eyes,

When he swept me off my feet,

The warmth of his body

When he pressed against my skin.

It was all so amazing,

Felt as if I was dreaming.

We sat watching the tiny waves,

His strong arms made me feel so safe.

That smile of his,

The touch of him…

Sent a chill down my spine,

It felt as if I was floating!

And when he looked me in the eye

And gave me the kiss of my life,

I swear he took my breath away!


  1. Hey...Very good one and romantic as well :)

  2. wow...very romantic dear:)...very nicely written:)..

  3. Aww, that was so sweet. Wonderful poem! I think this one may be my favorite (even though your other poems are great too). It reminds me of my fiance. :)

  4. Juhi,

    Please keep them safely so a collection can be publised once you have sufficient poems. Just beautiful is what I will say on this.

    Take care

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  5. m speechless.....its veree lively....!!.....nice one...

  6. Ur writing is pretty good..

    Very romantic....

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