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It’s been a while,
I’ve noticed you pass by…
I stand in my balcony,
And I’m on cloud 9
While I see you looking at me!

I see you out with your friends,
I watch you looking at me, secretly.
I don’t think you’re gonna open up on your own,
So I guess I need to make a move.

I put on my trainers the next day,
I pass by your house…
Only to see a locked door,
With a ‘For Sale’ board outside.

I break down on that very moment,
I can’t believe what I see.
I ask the next door neighbors…
They say he’s gone.

I fell in love,
But I was late…
Couldn’t express myself,
And now I regret!

Your face haunts me in my dreams,
I keep remembering your smile.
If you didn’t like me back,
Then why did you try to charm me?

It’s been a week,
I feel so low…
I hear the doorbell
And I see you, with flowers in your hands!

I can’t believe it…
You’re there,
You’re back…
On your knees, your heart talking smile
Asking me to be yours!

Love Ya All!
Feel Free To Comment!
Tc :)
*HugZz*

Comments

  1. AnonymousMarch 23, 2009 at 2:06 AM

    Angel. Angel. Love's little Angel.

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  2. Arnab MajumdarMarch 23, 2009 at 2:29 AM

    Another cute poem... nicely written!

    Cheers...

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  3. TrinaaMarch 23, 2009 at 2:56 AM

    aaaaaaaww! chweeeeet poem :)

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  4. PallavMarch 23, 2009 at 3:31 AM

    hey cant beleive.. an 14 year old gilr can write so well
    very cute...
    gr888

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  5. Sakhi.March 23, 2009 at 4:18 AM

    vey nice....but not fair heh....u nvr told me tht u fell in wid ur neighbor:)...lol

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  6. VictoriaMarch 23, 2009 at 3:01 PM

    thanks! i love this poem, its amazing! :))

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  7. VictoriaMarch 23, 2009 at 3:01 PM

    ^ typo.
    * :)

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  8. Alicia @ boylerpfMarch 24, 2009 at 5:28 AM

    Suuwweeet poems! Love reading them...so poignant...glad I stopped by!

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  9. AnonymousMarch 24, 2009 at 9:46 AM

    ha thats cool:)

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  10. TaraMarch 24, 2009 at 2:42 PM

    So cute and sweet! Nice picture. :)

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  11. DibsyMarch 24, 2009 at 3:42 PM

    aawwwwwww dat was cutte... XD

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  12. AnonymousMarch 24, 2009 at 6:03 PM

    really cute... it kinda reminds me of the song love save empty by erin mcarly... so pretty and nice..

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  13. AnonymousMarch 24, 2009 at 6:13 PM

    oh yeah.. just read your comment on my story... i'm probally gonna post some more on the story this week so no worries!

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  14. GinGerMarch 24, 2009 at 9:37 PM

    verrr verry well written....
    i cnt believe ur writting in so beautifully at dis age...amazing...
    n as far as the matter of the poem was concerned....i wish it happnd in reality....i wish i had a charming neighbour...n how i wish this poem applied to me...

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  15. ChanchalMarch 25, 2009 at 1:14 AM

    That was indeed 'beautiful'. Reflects your sentiments related to 'love themes', anyways, please do have a look at my blog, and please comment, only if you wish to. Actually, even I have recently penned a similar poetry on my blog, we share similar tastes, may be?

    http://manoshijanalyzing.blogvis.com

    Love
    Manoshij

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  16. AnonymousMarch 25, 2009 at 4:44 AM

    shoooooo shona shona lovely !!

    *hugs* for this love filled blog :)

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  17. OpaqueApril 2, 2009 at 12:34 AM

    Very neat stuff!!! Again, as I pointed out earlier, you could easily craft this into a song.

    Have you tried songwriting any time? You could do that. Keep writing!!!

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