The Best Th!ng ! ()wn

You took my hand in yours
Pulled me close, and caught me by my waist.
Locked your eyes into mine,
And made me move along
With the music that played behind.

Your warm touch,
Sailed right through my skin,
Our toes moved together
While all we cared about, was 'us'.

The music stopped,
You sat on your knees.
Held yours arms wide open...
Smiled and said,
You wanted to be with me.

I'd waited all along,
I had even given up on you.
But, finally the day came,
When I actually got the feeling of you.

I love everything about you
And I still have a view of that day in my eyes.
You're mine, and I'm glad,
Cause you're the best thing I own!

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  1. अविनाशMarch 10, 2009 at 12:59 AM

    The music stopped,
    You sat on your knees.
    Held yours arms wide open...
    Smiled and said,
    You wanted to be with me.

    Excellent buddy

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  2. Sakhi.March 10, 2009 at 1:03 AM

    wow yaar!!simply gr8!!loved it!!

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  3. AnonymousMarch 10, 2009 at 1:35 AM

    nice. It's really nice. Hope she thinks the same for me. lol

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  4. Arnab MajumdarMarch 10, 2009 at 3:37 AM

    Nice poem, like always... you're rekindling that thing I had for poems a long time ago.. :)

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  5. AdishaMarch 10, 2009 at 4:47 AM

    all we cared about, was us .. awesome !!

    Big dhamaka : small package ;) hehhehe. U are the Cutest ever ...

    Cheers sweti,
    adisha

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  6. AdishaMarch 10, 2009 at 6:01 AM

    adding u to my blog roll, hope u don't mind ...

    Cheers,
    adisha

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  7. RinkalMarch 10, 2009 at 7:29 AM

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  8. TabithaMarch 10, 2009 at 8:05 AM

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  9. TabithaMarch 10, 2009 at 8:06 AM

    U write so well dear...(:
    Happy holi sweets....hope u had a galla time

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  10. Preetilata【ツ】March 10, 2009 at 11:53 AM

    wowwwww! so darn roantic and beautiful :)

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  11. Preetilata【ツ】March 10, 2009 at 11:54 AM

    romantic **

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  12. AnonymousMarch 10, 2009 at 4:45 PM

    wow! that's a great poem... yeah, the eyes are mine except they really don't look that nice in real life.

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  13. BronteMarch 10, 2009 at 6:48 PM

    love it love it! tis is a good one

    oh thankyou much!

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  14. RinkalMarch 11, 2009 at 4:26 AM

    hiii juhi i loved it.keep it up ,check out my new post

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  15. TaraMarch 11, 2009 at 9:33 PM

    That is so sweet. :)

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  16. RinkalMarch 13, 2009 at 4:01 AM

    hiiiiiiii juhi i loved it
    dear

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