Hold me tightly, and never let go.
Whisper in my ears,
That you love me
And will always do so!

Kiss me gently,
And look into my eyes.
Clasp my hand in yours
And promise you'll never bid goodbye.

Let me bury my head in your arms,
Stay near me, breath into me.
Hold me tightly,
And please...never let go.

Happy Valentines Day to all of you! I hope all of you have a great life with your that Special one :)
Enjoy!
P.S : How's my drawing?? :D
*Hugz*
Wink!

Comments

  1. Blunt EdgesFebruary 13, 2010 at 12:17 PM

    a super-romantic poem on the most romantic day of the year! :)

    happy v-day 2 u too...n the drawing is super-cool! :D

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  2. Abhishek BeheraFebruary 13, 2010 at 3:45 PM

    *wow*

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  3. sjmachFebruary 14, 2010 at 12:10 AM

    Well written. Nice drawing...

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  4. Rohit DassaniFebruary 14, 2010 at 2:11 AM

    U and ur hero looks good in the shades!! nice one!!

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  5. ShritiFebruary 14, 2010 at 3:39 AM

    Awww.. sho shweet :))

    Happy valentine day to you too gal :))

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  6. Sakhi.February 14, 2010 at 4:03 AM

    nor do i like her 2 much...but it was gud 2 c her LIVE!!!...
    nyways nice poem as ever!!

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  7. Anil SawanFebruary 14, 2010 at 11:09 AM

    super sweet poem!! and ur drawing is cute just like you :D happy valentines day to u grl, god bles u with a super romantic guy and a dozen of lovely children :D

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  8. supriyaFebruary 14, 2010 at 12:32 PM

    gosh...you are ammmmmazingly talented... (be it writing or sketching)! a very happy valentine's day sweetie...

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  9. UnknownFebruary 15, 2010 at 9:38 PM

    Great one once again...:)
    I just got flowed with it...
    Luved it so much.
    Ur drawings are gud..:)
    Happy Valentine's Day buddy..

    Cheers

    Nuts

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  10. SatyUFebruary 18, 2010 at 5:03 AM

    :)
    I felt like my heart is speaking :)

    Truly beautiful :)

    I would say..AWESOME !! :)

    your drawing is beautiful too :)

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  11. Sakhi.February 18, 2010 at 8:49 AM

    okay,so now u wont b onlne:)
    all d best 4 ur xams!!

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  12. Sakhi.February 19, 2010 at 12:36 AM

    n hey....c my post..!!

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  13. TaraFebruary 23, 2010 at 7:54 PM

    Such a sweet poem and nice drawing too! Good job!

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