L()ng!ng..

I Stare At The Sky So Blue.
And I Wish I Could See You.
I Long To Be In Your Loving Arms
And Sail Through My Life With You!
Just Then A Tear Drops-
An Indication That My Dream Will Never Come True.
The Sky Will Be Blue
But My Dream Of Being With You...
I Know, Can Never Come True.

Comments

  1. OpaqueAugust 25, 2009 at 4:44 AM

    Simple and good!

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  2. RugmaAugust 25, 2009 at 8:29 AM

    nice...i undrstnd da ends of ur lines...bt "an idicatn" can b chngd in2 a simpler word i thnk...Dat word is a bit heavy!!
    U rayt damn well...keep goin...Hope u doin well now!
    Take care...
    Rugma...

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  3. DibsyAugust 25, 2009 at 10:06 AM

    Where do you get your pics? :O

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  4. Bella_182August 25, 2009 at 12:22 PM

    Hey,
    I'm glad your doing better!
    I'm okay
    School started back up for me today ugh such a short summer.

    Love ur posts((Yea where do you get ur pictures from cos they ROCK!))

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  5. TaraAugust 25, 2009 at 8:56 PM

    Another great poem and once again, the picture matches it perfectly.

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  6. TabithaAugust 25, 2009 at 10:01 PM

    Nice One!..How u doing..long time no c

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  7. lakshmiAugust 26, 2009 at 1:36 AM

    Nice one
    thanks for stopping by my blog
    enjoy ur day

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  8. ♥ ♥ Her- his ° ♥ ♥August 26, 2009 at 1:12 PM

    very nice blog..holds your world into it.
    u can visit mine.
    take care.

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  9. Sakhi.August 27, 2009 at 2:33 AM

    good one..!!
    ready 4 xams...??
    howz ur timetabl??

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  10. SavyAugust 27, 2009 at 8:30 AM

    Very nice. Gorgeous in its simplicity, but moving <3

    And AH! This is the first time since I've been reading your blog that you didn't end your poem with an ! Lol, I like it better, though ;)

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  11. Aparna (Life Takes)October 3, 2009 at 5:35 AM

    well written....the emotions portrayed are heart-warming

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